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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from frogbook
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Is that a real picture? It is wild, one way or the other. Great poem to go with and to advance the series in a most delightful way. Don't u hate it when you get beached?

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
    Especially this guy. It looks like a blue whale on its back.
Comment from nomi338
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When you are the largest life form on the beach, you can do whatever you want to do, including kicking sand in the face of the next largest life form. "Hey Vern, get a load of this guy." Flex for the camera big fellow.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    This one is on his back, I figure he's deep sixed
Comment from Gloria ....
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Whoa, some people, erm I mean whales will stop at nothing to get that out of the way unusual selfie.

Very fun addition to your poems of fascinating creatures.

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from lyenochka
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Poor Wendel! Apparently, he's a tech-savvy whale who can take selfies and use the translator which sounds unusually like a Bible verse, "whale can't live on krill alone." Lol.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Matthew 4:4: ... Man shall not live by bread alone, but by every word that proceedeth out of the mouth of God.
    Luke 4:4: ...man shall not live by bread alone, but by every word of God.
reply by lyenochka on 25-Feb-2018
    Cool. I didn't know that both Matthew and Luke had the same 4:4 reference!
Comment from closetpoetjester
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Hahaha
You genuinely made me cack with this one Bill...I just love where your crazy clever mind goes and I never really know until I get there.

I love the premise of the noun using itself as a verb haha

That alone is a sixer!
In a word, brilliant. Loved.

Hugs P

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks, P, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from damommy
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Wendel's in a fix. He'd better take that selfie, grab a Fez, and get back in the ocean.

It's hard to comprehend how large these beauties are. On my list of things to do before I die is to see a whale up close.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Saw some orca off Alaska a couple of years ago. Came right up to the sightseeing boat. Scary big.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute short poem you have penned about Wendel Whale. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks, Teri