Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about how we see life differently when we are young and when we are older we see all the plans we made was not necessarily good for us and God changed most of them to protect ourselves from harm.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thanks Sandra, for these super words and a great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Mastery

Exceptional

Super poetry, Roy. I am back and it's grand seeing your work again. Quetion: What does "rote" mean? I love your rymes but most of all I enjoy the meaaningful words in this poem. Bless you, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thanks Bob, for these marvellous words and a outstanding review, and shiny stars. Yes rote just means learning by repetitive rhetoric and the unworkable mores' of society. of sblessings, Roy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

So beautifully rhymed and you have quite an art with your ease of flow Roy, the message is the best part of the poem, you always finish with an amazing last line and this poem is no exception, 'my God will lead me through life's maze.' Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thanks Dolly, for these super words and a great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

Rhyme and rhythm is wonderful, as usual. I really enjoyed your use of alliteration throughout. Great message, and a great read. Many blessings ...Christy

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thanks Christy, for these super words and a great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Angela VA

Excellent

Ah, there's a lot of truth in here. I wonder if the young writers on here will understand it as well. Time leads to growth and learning that we cannot deny. This was easy to read because your meter and rhyming are "spot on."

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thanks Angela, for these super words and a great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Roy, This is a very beautiful and well written poem. You used great descriptive words and I love the scriptures you shared to go with this. Are you in the Shout Outs to the Lord club? You would be a great addition to the club my friend! Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thanks for the great review Teri, I wasn't aware there's any such club, thanks for telling me, Blessings Roy

reply by Teri7 on 25-Feb-2018

you are so welcome. It's the Shout Outs to the Lord club. Come join us! Blessings, Teri