Miscellaneous Poems Vol 2
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Comment from tfawcus
A chilling piece of satire, with a subtle build-up from a benign beginning. Telling this through the voice of the child is most effective. One does wonder what longer term impact these unusual conditions will have on them. Glad that you deviated in this direction today to make an important statement in a most graphic way.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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A chilling piece of satire, with a subtle build-up from a benign beginning. Telling this through the voice of the child is most effective. One does wonder what longer term impact these unusual conditions will have on them. Glad that you deviated in this direction today to make an important statement in a most graphic way.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thanks very much, Tony. I hope they are unusual conditions. Heaven help us if things go the way it seems they might well go. Very thankful for you stopping by to check out my poem :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the first day at school where security, freedom for life and praise of God appreciated; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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This speaks about the first day at school where security, freedom for life and praise of God appreciated; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thanks very much for reviewing - Craig
Comment from Trudi Perkins
Excellent, this is all too true in thus day and age.The truth shall set you free. Your poem tells it like it is. It's a shame that it is what it is. Great job. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem with us.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Excellent, this is all too true in thus day and age.The truth shall set you free. Your poem tells it like it is. It's a shame that it is what it is. Great job. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem with us.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank you very much for the delightful review, and the wonderful rating. Not so sure it's a lovely poem, but hopefully it speaks the truth. Very much appreciated - Craig :)
