Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

Very cute. Sometimes I wish that we didn't always have to be the example, but we do; I also believe that there is one of those children thrown into our lives at some point. I enjoyed your humor, and the use of the word 'cos in the last line. Good job.

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Rhyming Poetry' writing prompt.
You tell the story of a lonely and bullied girl and how the teacher is nice to her. (because she/he has to be???)
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and good rhyming poem you have penned. I am so glad you said it was not serious. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

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Comment from cailinraine8

Good

I like this poem... it peeked my interest and in the end we are treated with a surprise which is always fun. My only suggestion would be to pick a different adjective for "teacher" in the last line. But not if this one is your very best choice.... is a good poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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Comment from RodG

Excellent

I can easily relate to the Speaker here as I was a teacher, too, who did not always like the kids I had to work with. Your description of the student gives us a vivid picture of what she's like. Good rhymes chosen for this contest.

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Comment from Susan Burger

Excellent

Being in education for the past 23 years and 2 daughters who are teachers, this made me laugh. We all have had that child who irritates everyone throw sand fits that constantly disrupt class so I could relate! True portrayal of the situation in a humorous way!

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Many tha ,s