Black Blizzard, White
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "AT The End Of The Road"A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty
2 total reviews
Comment from Wetbelly01
Very sad... But Life has to go on no matter what!
I Like It!... Got me all chokey and teary there for a second!
Didn't see any problems...
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Very sad... But Life has to go on no matter what!
I Like It!... Got me all chokey and teary there for a second!
Didn't see any problems...
Well Done, as far as I'm concerned!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you SO much WB. You are my cheering section. I'm trying to get the rest of it on here so I can put it all together and have the pros look at the book. We will see. I know I have editing to do but I'm pretty happy with everything so far. Thanks again.
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Rah, Rah, REE, Kick 'em in the knee!
Rah, Rah. RASS, Kick 'em in...
The other knee!... LOL!
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LOL, LOL, LOL
Comment from robina1978
It is awful tense and well written the worry about his children. I nearly got tears in my eyes. So well written and full of emotions. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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It is awful tense and well written the worry about his children. I nearly got tears in my eyes. So well written and full of emotions. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
