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Black Blizzard, White

Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "The Aftermath"
A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty

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Comment from Wetbelly01
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Yeah. I was living in Hot Springs back in October 2013. when
they had that killer blizzard that killed something like 10,00 head
of cattle!... It was bad!... Fortunately, I was inside and nice and comfortable.
Guess I'll check out the next chapter now...
My compliments!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
    Thank you WB. I go back a lot further than that but they never get any better do they?
reply by Wetbelly01 on 23-Feb-2018
    I agree!... They are ruthless!
Comment from patcelaw
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This was a terrifying story of being trapped in a burning barn after a snowstorm. When I was 3 1/2 my twin brother and I went to the barn on our farm. My twin had strike anywhere matches and he struck a match on the hay ladened manger and held it under the nose of the horse. The match alarmed the horse and he knocked the burning match into the hay. We ran from the barn, but the barn went up in short order with terrific heat. Patricia

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
    Wow, that in itself is a story if you are able to write it. I too was in a house fire when I was about your age and it stays with you forever. Even though this book is fiction, there are many things that have a kernel of truth in it and you have to read between the lines. Thank you for your review and, if you haven't already, I'd put your story to paper.
reply by patcelaw on 23-Feb-2018
    I have the story written in the book of my life called 'She did right-Now-She Does Write. Just look at my profile. The story is chapter 1 after the Prologue.