Little Poems
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My word, Treischel. I read through without noticing the difficult form you took on, and that is the way it should be. Though complex, it read well. I would not have gone to the author's notes, but knowing you the master of forms, I wondered.
I enjoyed the wording, even if the form might have had influence, the understanding of the poem is always the point to success.
I thought it well put together and would have received a six had we more to go around, for it was well written indeed.
My best wishes.
RG
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Virtual SIx
My word, Treischel. I read through without noticing the difficult form you took on, and that is the way it should be. Though complex, it read well. I would not have gone to the author's notes, but knowing you the master of forms, I wondered.
I enjoyed the wording, even if the form might have had influence, the understanding of the poem is always the point to success.
I thought it well put together and would have received a six had we more to go around, for it was well written indeed.
My best wishes.
RG
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you RG. It was a difficult form to write, so I appreciate your input. Requiring 3 syllable end-rhymes really stretches vocabulary.
