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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
This is a rhetorical excursion reminiscing the omissions and commissions of humanity in their process of making a living.
The work highlights and decries the preponderance of greed and lust for money as the prevailing delights of mankind.
The work earns its texture through the use of rhetorics, simile, imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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This is a rhetorical excursion reminiscing the omissions and commissions of humanity in their process of making a living.
The work highlights and decries the preponderance of greed and lust for money as the prevailing delights of mankind.
The work earns its texture through the use of rhetorics, simile, imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks Lloyd reviewing this.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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Keep on flourishing!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks clearly, logically, candidly and humorously about God's Creation and man's poverty of appreciation, attitudinal plight of the earth; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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This speaks clearly, logically, candidly and humorously about God's Creation and man's poverty of appreciation, attitudinal plight of the earth; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from poetwatch
Well Doctor Ricky you write a mean written word. You tell it like it is for this world revolves on greed. The more money the devil gives the more the people want. That is the printed word. You say you are learning but you know the Lord watches over you. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Well Doctor Ricky you write a mean written word. You tell it like it is for this world revolves on greed. The more money the devil gives the more the people want. That is the printed word. You say you are learning but you know the Lord watches over you. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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And, thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Ricky
Each your humorous questions are real good
I like this one-"So, of course, sonce (since) woman has more ribs then does thay (that) mean
She is only good for competing in a 'BBQ Rib Eating
makes me smile since I have 25 ribs (normal for us humans is 24)
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Hello Ricky
Each your humorous questions are real good
I like this one-"So, of course, sonce (since) woman has more ribs then does thay (that) mean
She is only good for competing in a 'BBQ Rib Eating
makes me smile since I have 25 ribs (normal for us humans is 24)
Gert
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks Curt and I just corrected this doctor Ricky 1024 have a nice day
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You are welcome Ricky
Gert
Comment from Gloria ....
Fun poem Ricky questioning some of the sayings that we take for truth without ever actually trying to figure out what they mean. I think it's better to plant a garden. :)
Great job and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Fun poem Ricky questioning some of the sayings that we take for truth without ever actually trying to figure out what they mean. I think it's better to plant a garden. :)
Great job and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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hi Gloria farming runs in my family first started in Czechoslovakia before it went to the Czech Republic my grandfather and my grandfather's brother both had Farms sold them so they can have passage on a steamer to come over to the United States through Ellis Island along the way they milk the cows on board Feed the Children then it the decision has to be made whether to go coal mining in Illinois for farming in Nebraska they pick for me again so my dad was born in Clarkston over there and then he joined the Navy I was fascinated with my dad's Garden in swole even though you only group with tomatoes and cucumber and everything but they did well + flowers that's where I start to get my bug I grow for garden to using Miracle-Gro mainly potted plants that I grow from seed or depending I buy seedlings then feeding them weekly with Miracle Gro plant in them well and then double weekly Miracle-Gro feedings until they're ready to go my my squash was so large summer squash my friend joke believe it the ones in the supermarket I love them.
Thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from mermaids
This is a unique and very different theme here. I like how you mention Jurassic World and the Flintstones. Our world is a complicated one and I also like how you mentioned the presidents might be aliens.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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This is a unique and very different theme here. I like how you mention Jurassic World and the Flintstones. Our world is a complicated one and I also like how you mentioned the presidents might be aliens.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Highland I think you enjoy this as much as I enjoyed writing it specially when I had the cartoon characters to give it some fruit punch the light have a blessed day dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from dmt1967
"What came first the chicken or the (leg?) (egg)
"Then why did the chicken cross the road and why do you idiots here keep all (ypur) eggs in one (your)
I am not sure about this poem but it does remind me of a comedian who has found poems. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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"What came first the chicken or the (leg?) (egg)
"Then why did the chicken cross the road and why do you idiots here keep all (ypur) eggs in one (your)
I am not sure about this poem but it does remind me of a comedian who has found poems. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks again for the typos.
I'll review one for you Now!
Ricky.
Comment from Sherman541
Well now that was a rant full of rhymes! I so agree with so many things you said. I do disagree that women have an extra rib, as we all men and women each have 12, though, some can have 11 or 13 the average and common is 12. That was Biology :) I used to work for a Bank - money, they are for sure making millions, but I tell you they do not share. Lack of religion is true and that is very sad too. If you hadn't written this I would have had to. :) Someone needed to say it. Way to Go Ricky1024 ! Sherman541
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Well now that was a rant full of rhymes! I so agree with so many things you said. I do disagree that women have an extra rib, as we all men and women each have 12, though, some can have 11 or 13 the average and common is 12. That was Biology :) I used to work for a Bank - money, they are for sure making millions, but I tell you they do not share. Lack of religion is true and that is very sad too. If you hadn't written this I would have had to. :) Someone needed to say it. Way to Go Ricky1024 ! Sherman541
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Glad you enjoyed this Sherman.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
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I did enjoy this and all of your works that I have read :)
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My Pleasure Sherman.
Ricky...
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:)
