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Embers

Poetry 5-7-5

3 total reviews 
Comment from Ulla
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Hi There, it just says it all. The imagenary is great. I can just visualise the flames in the fireplace. Im have the fite on every night when it starts to grow cool. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
    Thanks Ulla. I appreciate your wonderful comments. I love campfires/fireplaces too. Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A beautiful poem of embers glowing and warming in the campfire, this is when we open our hearts and give our all our secrets! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
    Thank you Dolly! Melissa
Comment from judiverse
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There's something so warm and cozy about a campfire. I haven't been around one lately but have some pleasant memories of roasting wieners and marshmallows. You beautifully describe the fire at the end of a pleasant evening, the embers still glowing. This brings back memories. Excellent 5-7-5 syllable count, and best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
    Thanks Judi for the wonderful review. Melissa
reply by judiverse on 19-Feb-2018
    You're welcome. This really set a mood, and brought back memories. judi