Apothecary's love
A stone and wildflower elixir15 total reviews
Comment from heavenempress
hie, beautiful piece of work you have displayed. keep it up. creative work at play. the poetry is very informative. easy flowing but you can break the poem into paragraphs so that it becomes easier for one to follow. it is helps also to follow the description stages. keep it up. stay well.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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hie, beautiful piece of work you have displayed. keep it up. creative work at play. the poetry is very informative. easy flowing but you can break the poem into paragraphs so that it becomes easier for one to follow. it is helps also to follow the description stages. keep it up. stay well.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reading and responding and also for the suggestive changes.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. Tis should do you well in the contest. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. Tis should do you well in the contest. Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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A picture is worth a thousand words. Thank you for the beautiful portrait you painted for me. It will shine from a corner on dark days.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem has chilling undertones and many would poison their spouses with such elixir in years gone by with deadly concoctions, well written with deadly vibrations, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Your poem has chilling undertones and many would poison their spouses with such elixir in years gone by with deadly concoctions, well written with deadly vibrations, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I f love is a poison it makes for a beautiful death and always will. Thank you for your deep thoughts and generous words.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
What a wonderful uniquely written love poem, terrific musical sounds throughout, love the dark journey to the heart, almost mysterious in its context.
Some fantastic, very memorable lines.
Mitchell
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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What a wonderful uniquely written love poem, terrific musical sounds throughout, love the dark journey to the heart, almost mysterious in its context.
Some fantastic, very memorable lines.
Mitchell
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Your review is like a poem in itself. It is a dark journey of the heart but to quote another poet, Rod Mcquen , "once and a while along the way love has been good to me." Love makes the journey sufferable and possible. Thank you ever so much.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Love Poem Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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This is a Love Poem Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you. I know its is work to review. Be objective and positive. You have excelled at both.
