The Stalker
So annoying and frightening4 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
WHOA! What a strong powerful statement. GOOD luck contest. You just got my thumbs up and now you are in 1st by yourself. Hope you win! Photo emphasizes person is serious and doesn't want to be stalked. Love way you rhyme keep, creep and weep. Yes, women, especially need to be aware of their surroundings at all times. liberty justice
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
WHOA! What a strong powerful statement. GOOD luck contest. You just got my thumbs up and now you are in 1st by yourself. Hope you win! Photo emphasizes person is serious and doesn't want to be stalked. Love way you rhyme keep, creep and weep. Yes, women, especially need to be aware of their surroundings at all times. liberty justice
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you, so pleased you liked it.
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Who is this, please. After contest ends, type in your name so I will know who you are. Thanks! liberty justice
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Hi Liberty Justice. I came third in the contest. Thanks for voting.
Have a nice day. Jenintorre (Jen) x
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Yeah that happened to
me a few times when I
was in first place and
writers beat me. Liberty
justice
Check out my
portfolio and my 2 books.
Comment from Dutchie
Very well written 1-6-1 poem. It has the right syllable count and the rhyming is perfect too. You needed a few words but they said it all. Great!! Fia
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
Very well written 1-6-1 poem. It has the right syllable count and the rhyming is perfect too. You needed a few words but they said it all. Great!! Fia
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much Fla. So glad you liked it.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I enjoyed this little 1-6-1 poem. I like how it reads as a sentence. Most of the ones that I have reviewed do not. I also like how the poem is displayed. With these short poems, display counts a lot.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
I enjoyed this little 1-6-1 poem. I like how it reads as a sentence. Most of the ones that I have reviewed do not. I also like how the poem is displayed. With these short poems, display counts a lot.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you Debbie for your great review. I agree presentation is important.
Comment from bmethner
Powerful message with so few words. It perfectly fits the 1-6-1 poem requirements and the artwork certainly captures the message of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
Powerful message with so few words. It perfectly fits the 1-6-1 poem requirements and the artwork certainly captures the message of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks for your great review.