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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Sunset"Eclectic style
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Comment from frogbook
A lovely poem to match your superb choice of art and that picture could only be explained by something spiritual to follow. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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A lovely poem to match your superb choice of art and that picture could only be explained by something spiritual to follow. Great job.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Nnn I It
Comment from jppoet
Another glorious poem, added in mood and imagery by its lovely photo.
it doesnt get much better than this. congratulations on your artistry.
blessings, john
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Another glorious poem, added in mood and imagery by its lovely photo.
it doesnt get much better than this. congratulations on your artistry.
blessings, john
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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That?s real appreciation, thanks John ,
Blssings and a hug, Trisha
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I like the sentiment of this work. It draws a lovely literary image of one of our Makers often overlooked natural glories. There is a subtle faith weaved into each passage, not preachy or bible thumping, simply an elegant expression of natural beauty and acknowledgement of it's origins.
While there are two lines where the rhythm reads a bit bumpy (last two stanzas). I believe only a minor tweak might be all that's needed. That said, there is a quiet truthfulness in this work that adds to it's overall appeal. Keep creating.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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I like the sentiment of this work. It draws a lovely literary image of one of our Makers often overlooked natural glories. There is a subtle faith weaved into each passage, not preachy or bible thumping, simply an elegant expression of natural beauty and acknowledgement of it's origins.
While there are two lines where the rhythm reads a bit bumpy (last two stanzas). I believe only a minor tweak might be all that's needed. That said, there is a quiet truthfulness in this work that adds to it's overall appeal. Keep creating.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Hi, I reread my poem, and with yiur observation changed the last two lines. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful faith poem and quite modern and prayer like. I could imagine saying this prayer at the end of the day just before bed, delightful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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This is a beautiful faith poem and quite modern and prayer like. I could imagine saying this prayer at the end of the day just before bed, delightful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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I?m a lark, so sunset is almost bedtime for me! His work is beautiful, no matter what, thanks
Hugs, Trisha
