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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from lyenochka
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Hooray for the Pollinator. I almost want his 'business' to be 'buzziness' on his back. Lol. But it's quite evident how much work Benny has been doing. Thanks for writing about the gardener's friend.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from nomi338
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Honey Bee good or I'll Bee bad. That was the threat my bet gal gave me and brother believe me when she was bad she was very bad. After that I was the best little Bee you ever did see. Please Beeleeve me.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
    Thanks, nomi, for sharing.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, we couldn;t do without him. If he was not there, we wouldn;thave any vegetables and fruit. Hence it's so frightening they're dying off. A great wee poem. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from judiverse
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We'll have to put him right up there with the Terminator. The bee is at least a busy creature, and we can appreciate his usefulness. Very colorful, and I like the designation the Pollinator. Clever third line. The bee must take delight in his work. Great artwork choice. judi

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
    Thanks, Judi
reply by judiverse on 16-Feb-2018
    You're quite welcome. judi
Comment from damommy
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He certainly carries his work with him. Without him and others like him, there'd be no fruits or vegetables, or flowers.

Busy as a bee are true words.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018


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    Thanks, da
Comment from The kurlman
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Bill, you have been at this for awhile. What a great job tying the picture and your poem together. You nailed your story in 3 lines. Very impressive. I hope you critique some of my poems. The kurlman

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
    Thanks, to, for the nice review. I will fan you now. Bill
Comment from Teri7
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Now I really like this type of poem and the subject. You used very good descriptive words and the nice picture. It almost looks like the bee has snow on its wings and body, but I guess that is the pollen! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
    Thanks, Teri