Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Oh, a lovely bright write, my friend. I hope all is well with you. Haven't read from you for a while. Vibrant, as well food for thought with this.
Bravo.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes we had a blue moon/ blood/eclipse some days ago now.. It was truly amazing Ine, beautifully written haiku, as an entry in this contest, however you have too many syllables in your last line, perhaps " devoted, selfless" would suffice, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week.

reply by royowen on 16-Feb-2018

You too Ine

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is an interesting poem. I have never interacted frogs with the moon. Your poem is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week.

reply by c_lucas on 16-Feb-2018

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Well now I know what frogs are thinking when they look up at the moon, they are devoted unselfishly to the light beaming down on them, good luck with the contest Robina, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice last part of the week.