Hope Chest
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Comment from misscookie
I have no more stars to give
You captured my attention first by the photo you choose to go with your poem
which is a perfect match
That looks like my youngest sons dresser he always keep it messy
I thought you poem s right on point
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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I have no more stars to give
You captured my attention first by the photo you choose to go with your poem
which is a perfect match
That looks like my youngest sons dresser he always keep it messy
I thought you poem s right on point
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you, dear.
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You are very welcome,
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Bichon
Oh a definitely rebel, heehee. I enjoyed reading your poem, it had a very powerful tone and the delivery was very nice. Great job with this one, five stars for sure.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Oh a definitely rebel, heehee. I enjoyed reading your poem, it had a very powerful tone and the delivery was very nice. Great job with this one, five stars for sure.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from robina1978
A nice photo of a cabinet
bulges out with your stuff I think. You threw some out upon the floor, danced a bit and kicked some shit. And you called a number I knew before.. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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A nice photo of a cabinet
bulges out with your stuff I think. You threw some out upon the floor, danced a bit and kicked some shit. And you called a number I knew before.. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A good poem Victor - I can identify. Written very much in your style and it moves along a pace. Looking at the picture, I thought the title Hope Chest meant - hope I can find what I'm looking for in this clutter LOL. 'Hope blooms when age does - I reckon you are right. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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A good poem Victor - I can identify. Written very much in your style and it moves along a pace. Looking at the picture, I thought the title Hope Chest meant - hope I can find what I'm looking for in this clutter LOL. 'Hope blooms when age does - I reckon you are right. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Dorothy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The first line might sound better is you said, 'Don't ever give me limits', just a though and doesn't take anything away from your rebellious write, good luck with it Victor, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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The first line might sound better is you said, 'Don't ever give me limits', just a though and doesn't take anything away from your rebellious write, good luck with it Victor, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you, my dear. And ur suggestion is actually quite good. Hmmm.
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I went back and changed it. U were right. BTW, I never change my poems. U should consider this either as the humbling of victor touche (lol) or winning the lottery. (much better)
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You made me smile Victor, have a great day, love Dolly x
Comment from Sherman541
I have to say I like the picture, but I am not so sure it matches with the title of this poem. Although, do you speak a lot about youth and the young and that does remind of my daughter's dresser upon occasions during the teen years. Very carefree happy go lucky kind of poem. I like it and works well. Sherman541
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I have to say I like the picture, but I am not so sure it matches with the title of this poem. Although, do you speak a lot about youth and the young and that does remind of my daughter's dresser upon occasions during the teen years. Very carefree happy go lucky kind of poem. I like it and works well. Sherman541
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you.
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you are welcome
