Hope Chest
life in drawer46 total reviews
Comment from George Jr
Nice bit of work. A good example of creating an image of what your thinking and how your character work, you rebel :-D
...I don't think there's much hope for that dresser though
-peace
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Nice bit of work. A good example of creating an image of what your thinking and how your character work, you rebel :-D
...I don't think there's much hope for that dresser though
-peace
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Ha! Yes, I think it's had it. Thank you.
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:-D
Comment from Roxanne56
Love the image you used. I think I had a dresser just like it. :) Love the poem. I think every teenager goes through a rebellious stage. "I danced a bit and kicked some shit." I definitely did that. Lol
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Love the image you used. I think I had a dresser just like it. :) Love the poem. I think every teenager goes through a rebellious stage. "I danced a bit and kicked some shit." I definitely did that. Lol
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Yup, me too. I still do sometimes. LOL Thank you.
Comment from c_lucas
One should live a life of surprises and dreams. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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One should live a life of surprises and dreams. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you very much Charlie. Are you finally doing better, or still problems? I will use the hot line for U. Of course, noone ever answers, but...who knows?
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Thank you, Victor. Charlie
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello I like your free verse reminds me when I was a teenager and being rebellious
telling me what to do
and saying, 'I'm wrong'
come on don't rush
or dare even push
me around.
I have found
my way is the only way
I will behave everyday ...
I want to have fun.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Hello I like your free verse reminds me when I was a teenager and being rebellious
telling me what to do
and saying, 'I'm wrong'
come on don't rush
or dare even push
me around.
I have found
my way is the only way
I will behave everyday ...
I want to have fun.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Good girl. I love it.
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Hello victortouche,
I want to Thank you for the inspiration from your poem (Hope Chest)
Question is alright if I post what I wrote, which will be in rhymes and say I was
inspirated by your poem (Hope Chest?)
Gert
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Of course U may. I'm honored.
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Thank you very much victortouche
Will do
Gert
Comment from ScarletAffliction
I danced a bit
And kicked some shit
And called a number
I knew before...
I had a good chuckle at this one! Thank you for this great piece! The picture caught my interest to begin with nicely. Great scheme made for a pleasant read. Thank you!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I danced a bit
And kicked some shit
And called a number
I knew before...
I had a good chuckle at this one! Thank you for this great piece! The picture caught my interest to begin with nicely. Great scheme made for a pleasant read. Thank you!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Ha ha. I shall simply...thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I think we all have worn out furniture. LOL Once again, you give us a poem that reflects reality in our lives. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. I think we all have worn out furniture. LOL Once again, you give us a poem that reflects reality in our lives. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Yup, worn out furniture, worn out knee, worn out hips, but I digress. Thank you.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Ahhh, never stop living. Whether you are a child or an adult, never stop living.
Let go of the limitations you, or anyone else, has placed on you.
Pull the stuff out of the drawers and kick around.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Ahhh, never stop living. Whether you are a child or an adult, never stop living.
Let go of the limitations you, or anyone else, has placed on you.
Pull the stuff out of the drawers and kick around.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Absolutely right my dear. Never stop living. Thank you.
Comment from ameen786
Grown ups try to live by society's norms but not the young and rebellious; specially, in today's milieu of the 'Me generation'= thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Grown ups try to live by society's norms but not the young and rebellious; specially, in today's milieu of the 'Me generation'= thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from estory
There are some fresh, imaginative, personal elements to this free verse poem, so I am giving it a six. I loved the minimalist repetitions, they seemed to emblemize the frustrations of living, the feeling that your hopes are coming to nothing. And there's that determination to go somewhere, become something, with all the youthful energy roiling underneath. I liked the images, I danced a bit. interesting piece estory
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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There are some fresh, imaginative, personal elements to this free verse poem, so I am giving it a six. I loved the minimalist repetitions, they seemed to emblemize the frustrations of living, the feeling that your hopes are coming to nothing. And there's that determination to go somewhere, become something, with all the youthful energy roiling underneath. I liked the images, I danced a bit. interesting piece estory
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Now go kick some s..t and U'll be there. LOL Thank you. I must say, U keep an open mind as well as anybody I've ever met. That, in itself, is refreshing. Thanks for spilling the stars.
Comment from Boogienights
I loved this, what a great attitude! So often when people are they think it's time to slow down,take it easier. To hell with that I say. I don't feel much different than when I was 23.Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I loved this, what a great attitude! So often when people are they think it's time to slow down,take it easier. To hell with that I say. I don't feel much different than when I was 23.Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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Ha. Thanks for reading.
