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I asked of God...part2

Have a servant heart.

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Comment from crybry67
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This is to serve as a review for both parts 1 and 2. Thanks, I needed that! I asked for a servants heart, and vowed to gladly serve. I see that God is working things for our good, improved relationships and healing. My problem is the 'gladly' part of service. That's the part I'm not so good at. Thank you for your words on this subject. They really hit home. Blessings... Christy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    But if you say yes, you will never regret it, but it does require trust, and maybe a bridge too far. Thank you for the wonderful review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Roy;
A wonderful reminder that we are to be servants first, and treat our fellow man as He did. So many folks believe they must be served in this world; they forget they are just fellow travelers on this earth,

~patty~

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thanks again Patty, your support and gracious words are most welcome, blessings, Roy
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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"Your love and worship raises me to rule upon my throne,
for that is why I share my wealth, and take you for my own.
I give you life, remove all strife, to set you free from sin,
I call you friend and brother, kin, your freedom -- I will win."
Gosh this is magnificent. It sounds as if it is directly from the bible but more polished- amazing. Well done as usual Bill xx love Meia

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thanks again dear Meia, for your amazing support and sage observations blessings, Roy
Comment from RGstar
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Unfortunately, Roy, this great wisdom is seldom or never heeded , or carried out, in this day and time, even by most who know God. It seems this world would be a better place if such was the norm.
My beast wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    That's true RG, it takes a lot to overcome...self...the real enemy. Thanks for great insight, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dean Kuch
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While I thoroughly enjoyed the entirety of your well written follow up to the first part of this spiritually themed piece, I especially liked the internal rhyme you included in the poem.
Excellent work as always, Roy.
Blessings...

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thanks again Dea, your support and encouraging comments I appreciate you,, blessings, Roy
Comment from misscookie
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I have no more stars to give
You captured my attention as I looked at the artwork you post
It is a perfect match.
Each line touched me dearly, and warmed my soul this chilly morning. after reading part 2 I had to find pat one
Cookie

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thanks Cookie, for these super words and review, blessings, Roy
reply by misscookie on 13-Feb-2018
    Your very welcome
    Happy Valentines Day To you
    Cookie
Comment from Bichon
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A lovely poem that describes and puts your faith into a nice perspective. Fabulous job Roy, I enjoyed reading this lovely and thoughtful part two.

Chloe

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thanks again Chloe, for these super words great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the task God gives us, it is not always the choice we would make, but if we obey and trust Him in His guidance we will flourish and get respect from others.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thanks Sandra, for these lovely words and sage review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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A great piece of work Roy - I love the story. I like the way this is written - the language you use, very down to earth. Lovely quote from Luke14:10 - so wise - if you are at the bottom there is only one way to go, and that's up. A lovely read - you are so lucky in your faith. Dorothy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thanks Dorothy, for these lovely words and sage review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The work reminisces a rapprochement with God that causes the protagonist who had earlier refused wearing the uniform of a servant to now wear it with pride and a high sense of dignity.

The work highlights his earlier demeaning demeanor on the thought of wearing such a uniform and his latter stand to crave for it with pride, occasioned by his tutelage under the Lord, Jesus Christ.

The work earns its texture through the use of rhymes, rhetorics and imagery.

Outstanding work! Keep the flag flying!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thanks Lloyd, for these very sage words and outstanding review, and stars, blessings, Roy
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 13-Feb-2018
    Remain Blessed!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Thanks Lioyd