Love Poem One
Whatâ??s Love Got To Do with It?21 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is stiletto sharp and very very clever. I think it is brilliant. I really hope it does well in the competition. Great to see something different. Good luck in the competition kindest regards and best wishes love Meia x
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This is stiletto sharp and very very clever. I think it is brilliant. I really hope it does well in the competition. Great to see something different. Good luck in the competition kindest regards and best wishes love Meia x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Mitchell Brontë
Had to read this a few times to get it, a whodunnit in a poem.
She did it................
Unique 5-7-5 that was so enjoyable ..................
Mitchell
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Had to read this a few times to get it, a whodunnit in a poem.
She did it................
Unique 5-7-5 that was so enjoyable ..................
Mitchell
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Your story is clead with so few words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt.
Your story is clead with so few words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Spitfire
A whodunit in seventeen syllables. With the black and white background, I would suggest the answer is easy. To be turned down by a lover who prefers men would be the pits.
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A whodunit in seventeen syllables. With the black and white background, I would suggest the answer is easy. To be turned down by a lover who prefers men would be the pits.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Zue65
Wow I didn't know a 5-7-5 poetical form can be used for mystery and crime poetry. And the author was really successful in doing so. Amazing and clever, truly an excellent write.Thanks for sharing.
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Wow I didn't know a 5-7-5 poetical form can be used for mystery and crime poetry. And the author was really successful in doing so. Amazing and clever, truly an excellent write.Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Mark Valentine
One of the more original and evocative illustrations I've seen for a 5-7-5 (how many guns does it take to kill a guy?). A nice twist on the hell-hath-no-fury theme. So good to see you posting again. I think I missed a post or two. Got to go back and catch them.
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One of the more original and evocative illustrations I've seen for a 5-7-5 (how many guns does it take to kill a guy?). A nice twist on the hell-hath-no-fury theme. So good to see you posting again. I think I missed a post or two. Got to go back and catch them.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Ella Gott
Wow this is very different then most 575 pieces I have read. I entered that competition too! Im glad I get to review another teammates piece. Great job 5 stars for sure!!!!!!
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Wow this is very different then most 575 pieces I have read. I entered that competition too! Im glad I get to review another teammates piece. Great job 5 stars for sure!!!!!!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from His Grayness
I had real problems trying to get in touch with the message and intent of this work. After reading it three times, I'm thinking I may have missed some preamble or earlier chapter that sets the stage? Sorry to have lost the plot! HIS GRAYNESS
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I had real problems trying to get in touch with the message and intent of this work. After reading it three times, I'm thinking I may have missed some preamble or earlier chapter that sets the stage? Sorry to have lost the plot! HIS GRAYNESS
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Thomas Bowling
And that's all the lady said. We questioned her for hours but got nowhere. We tried to trick a confession out of her but had no luck. In the end, Fred was still dead and Ed is missing.
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And that's all the lady said. We questioned her for hours but got nowhere. We tried to trick a confession out of her but had no luck. In the end, Fred was still dead and Ed is missing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
Comment from Janet Foor
I love it. Very clever and creative and a different kind of love 5/7/5 poem.
Who knew what Fred would do and now he's dead....poor Fred. I hope she chooses better next time. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessing
Janet
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I love it. Very clever and creative and a different kind of love 5/7/5 poem.
Who knew what Fred would do and now he's dead....poor Fred. I hope she chooses better next time. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessing
Janet
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
