Love Poem One
Whatâ??s Love Got To Do with It?21 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
This would be the hardest part of any let down in love to realize not only are you the wrong person but the wrong sex an excellent 5-7-5 poem very well done****kahpot
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This would be the hardest part of any let down in love to realize not only are you the wrong person but the wrong sex an excellent 5-7-5 poem very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Jul-2018
Comment from Rasmine
Maybe now she and Ed will get together? Just being silly. Wonder who knocked off poor Fred? I bet it's the butler! The butler always does it. :P
Good luck in the contest.
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Maybe now she and Ed will get together? Just being silly. Wonder who knocked off poor Fred? I bet it's the butler! The butler always does it. :P
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
Comment from TPAC
A great who did it. Was it the rejected lover, or the new desire? This write mystery does grip, leaving room for the mind to expand its views. I like the thought pondering and its possibilities.
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A great who did it. Was it the rejected lover, or the new desire? This write mystery does grip, leaving room for the mind to expand its views. I like the thought pondering and its possibilities.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
Comment from wordsfromsue
Hmm, I don't think she did it, or Ed would've up the dead one!
Maybe....
In any event, that'll teach Fred he should've curbed his wondering ways...
Fun piece, I enjoyed it. :-)
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Hmm, I don't think she did it, or Ed would've up the dead one!
Maybe....
In any event, that'll teach Fred he should've curbed his wondering ways...
Fun piece, I enjoyed it. :-)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi LoannaLois, this piece really made me laugh. A good 5/7/5 written in perfect form and I enjoyed the humour. Now I wonder who did Fred in. Could it have been the un-named one LOL? Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hi LoannaLois, this piece really made me laugh. A good 5/7/5 written in perfect form and I enjoyed the humour. Now I wonder who did Fred in. Could it have been the un-named one LOL? Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. Many people are confused about their identity these days. When we fall in love with a guy we can just hope he knows who he is.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. Many people are confused about their identity these days. When we fall in love with a guy we can just hope he knows who he is.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
Comment from Liberty Justice
Whoa I got some tough competition in contests. Looks like a threesome love triangle where woman is in love with a man Ed who is in love with another man. Very suspenseful. Nicely written.liberty justice
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Whoa I got some tough competition in contests. Looks like a threesome love triangle where woman is in love with a man Ed who is in love with another man. Very suspenseful. Nicely written.liberty justice
Comment Written 12-Feb-2018
Comment from RGstar
To the point, and without much fuss. Sometimes things need to be told as they are, this is such a time.
Good luck in the competition
My best wishes.
RGstar
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To the point, and without much fuss. Sometimes things need to be told as they are, this is such a time.
Good luck in the competition
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
This really appeals to my warped sense of humour. I have never seen a 5-7-5 like this. Most are pale imitations of haiku that don't quite make it into the Japanese style. This doesn't even try! Which of course it doesn't need to do. Unashamedly embracing a monorhymed format this is a "reductio ad absurdam" of a tragic occurrence. I loved it.
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This really appeals to my warped sense of humour. I have never seen a 5-7-5 like this. Most are pale imitations of haiku that don't quite make it into the Japanese style. This doesn't even try! Which of course it doesn't need to do. Unashamedly embracing a monorhymed format this is a "reductio ad absurdam" of a tragic occurrence. I loved it.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
Comment from Bichon
Definitely has the potential to be a great poem, or even a set of poems, but I will admit, I am quite confused. Even after reading over it a few times. Is there perhaps another part of this poem that has been released as a chapter one or some sorts?
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Definitely has the potential to be a great poem, or even a set of poems, but I will admit, I am quite confused. Even after reading over it a few times. Is there perhaps another part of this poem that has been released as a chapter one or some sorts?
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
