Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute one you have done Bill. You used very cute and well thought out dialogue. You always use very good wording and great imagery with the words and art work! Best wishes in publishing your book my friend! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Ned I see is a consistent idiot. It is nice to know that some things never seem to change. If brains were gun powder he couldn't blow his nose. He is clueless and for that reason, I like the guy a lot. He makes a dummy feel superior.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thanks, nomi. I base him on an amalgamate of my first wife's family members. And I'm being kind.

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

hahahahaha, Bill, you make me laugh so much, your two characters, Ned and Pons, are just too funny. I'm sure your publishers will love them. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thanks, Ulla. Hope you're right.

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Love the dialogue in this scene Bill and the characters Ned and Pons are sooo funny, love the way they talk......dem, dat, fer......glorious
Mitchell

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018

Thanks, Mitchell.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

I wish them well in the new endeavor. I know they will do well if Pons can keep Ned quiet. lol

I'm happy you're getting these published. 8-)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is the same outfit that published my book, but on to more important things. My favorite olive oil is Pons Extra Virgin. You can buy it online at Amazon year round, or at Sam's in the spring. They only sell the first pressing. It is super mild and fruity with a peppery finish. It's great on salads. I like to drizzle it on bruschetta. A little goat cheese and a sun-dried tomato make a great appetizer, I can't spell that other word. I know it starts with an H, but I'm lost after that. I googled it, Hors d'oeuvres. That's weird. It sounds like a horse taking a bow.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

Thanks for the appetizer illustration.

Comment from Ella Gott

Excellent

Great job Bill, as always! Your works are super fun to read, and you are a great, encouraging fan! I am definitely getting my little brother to read this!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

Thanks, Ella. You are very most kind. Bill

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Six stars for the book... I know it will be great. The photo of the boys is PERFECT. LOL! Sucky has scurvy. Too bad. This will only work in English where words can be mixed up so easily. :)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

Wow! Thanks, Phyllis. I appreciate your terrific review. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Poor Sookie! Ned will never get his name right. He doesn't seem familiar with Scorsese either. His speech is typically painful except in: "Ned: My roguish demeanor and focus is a lesson in greatness."
That sounded way to polished for Ned. Just an observation. Otherwise, entertaining comic routine.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

How about: My roguish demaynor is yer lesson in greatnessness.

reply by lyenochka on 10-Feb-2018

Now THAT sounds like Ned.

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018

Great! It's in.