A Goose Named Duck
He is considered our pet5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, A Goose Named Duck, has a lot of fun elements to it that make me want to get my own cement goose. I'll name mine Swanee.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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This free verse, A Goose Named Duck, has a lot of fun elements to it that make me want to get my own cement goose. I'll name mine Swanee.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Like it. Swanee is a fine name for a goose. Thanks for the read and the comment.
Comment from Wetbelly01
This is actually a fine poem for this contest,
I would think... It's got everything going for it...
Smooth rhythm and rhyme... Great storyline...
No 'glitches' along the way...
My compliments on a fine, entertaining piece!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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This is actually a fine poem for this contest,
I would think... It's got everything going for it...
Smooth rhythm and rhyme... Great storyline...
No 'glitches' along the way...
My compliments on a fine, entertaining piece!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the read and the encouraging words.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written Children's poem titled A Goose named Duck. You used such cute wording and very cute imagery with the art work. Fun to read and review. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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This is a very cute and well written Children's poem titled A Goose named Duck. You used such cute wording and very cute imagery with the art work. Fun to read and review. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the read and the encouraging words.
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a fun children's poem. My family has had similar pets over the years that were dressed for the various holidays and occasions
Very nicely done complete with a picture of Duck.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is a fun children's poem. My family has had similar pets over the years that were dressed for the various holidays and occasions
Very nicely done complete with a picture of Duck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the read and the kind words.
Comment from Dan Diego
I liked this poem. The picture, words, colors, and title are all silly, just the way kids like them. I am not a writer of children's stories, but I feel compelled to call out two words - staunchly and gaieties - not sure what grade level these are at. Other than that, I think you've written a darling little poem that is humorous and poetic. Good luck with the prompt. I wouldn't change a word.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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I liked this poem. The picture, words, colors, and title are all silly, just the way kids like them. I am not a writer of children's stories, but I feel compelled to call out two words - staunchly and gaieties - not sure what grade level these are at. Other than that, I think you've written a darling little poem that is humorous and poetic. Good luck with the prompt. I wouldn't change a word.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the read and the comments. I have found that children like to be challenged by words and are gratified to learn new ones.
