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Spinning Words

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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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It seems as you've described so well that in a moment, an inspiration to write comes from an unexpected place. Life is indeed to short not to try to make the most of it while we have it. You have hammered home your points superbly. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you Jeffrey for your kind review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from rtobaygo
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Good morning, Dolly

Enjoyed the poem. I really liked your philosophical approach, the varied aspects of your life. If only more people would adapt the same pov:

I made a vow, not to miss a moment,
to live each day contented with my lot.
Focus eyes on every component,
be thankful for the little things I've got.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thank you Ray for your thoughtful review, if I won money on the lottery it would not improve my life, only the lives of my children, my lif is already perfect, thanks again, love Dolly x
Comment from seken58
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Hi Dolly,
You are indeed a fine poet and this one is a perfect example of your skill.
I agree with your sentiment that inspiration can arise in an instant and a
fine poem or tale unfold.
The poem flows with wit, wonder and a very smooth cadence.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thank you Shirley for your kind review, I am honoured by your wonderful words, love Dolly x
Comment from TPAC
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Sweet words, lovely conveyances I found touching to heart, views yielded compelling in interests. A wonderful read, delighting aspects to find interest in a raging soul. All in my opinion of this write.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your thoughtful review, I am honoured by your words, love Dolly x
Comment from robyn corum
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Dolly,

Very cool. I like the idea that you can move when the muse moves YOU. You are not required to write when you don't want to. That's one of the cool things about this. At least until we all become so rich and famous and are under contract to turn out so many pieces a year... hahahaha! Thanks, friend!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you Robyn for your review, I am honoured, love Dolly x
Comment from Fabiha_N
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This is a really well-written poem! I like the flow to the words, and I love the picture used too. This is basically my experience with writing stories, but it usually takes a while to come up with an idea! Great job!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Yes ideas are thin on the ground on occasions, and you need to be relaxed for words to flow, thank you for your review, love Dolly x
Comment from Gloria ....
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What a beautiful metaphor, Dolly. I love the idea of spinning words and time. And weaving in the flowers and all the thoughts that come along with it.

Excellent. I much enjoyed. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you Gloria for your thoughtful review. You have no problem spinning your words which are always a delight, love Dolly x
Comment from June Sargent
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Yes, we certainly can idle our lives away - or we can choose to savor each moment and preserve them by painting word pictures on paper. You do have a way of spinning your words to create lovely poems. Thank you for sharing your sentiments.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks June for your thoughtful review, love Dolly x
Comment from ameen786
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Dolly my friend, this is beautiful poetry and in a challenging form/style; you did great, outstanding and meaningful verses in excellent rhymes, 'Born are rhymes of love and life and nature,where fun with time and meter also feature." Simply awesome! Please accept a virtual six and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your thoughtful review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from Ronni
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Perfectly said dear Dolly!!!
So many lead such routine, structured, stressful lives they no longer can or
know how to unwind or relax.
Totally relate to your theme and message, and likewise indulge in myself,
with same results and rewards you noted too. Thanks for sharing dear.
Love, blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you Ronni for your thoughtful review, unless we totally relax we cannot produce anything of an value, love Dolly x