Pain
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Comment from Liberty Justice
Good luck in contest. I just gave you my vote that made you climb upward. Your poem is so strong and so true. Sometimes we can take our pain and use it to make us stronger or allow pain to take us down and make us weaker. VERY INSPIRATIONAL. liberty justice
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Good luck in contest. I just gave you my vote that made you climb upward. Your poem is so strong and so true. Sometimes we can take our pain and use it to make us stronger or allow pain to take us down and make us weaker. VERY INSPIRATIONAL. liberty justice
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your kind and generous review. I appreciate your vote a great deal.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-nine-one, Pain, uses the eleven syllables to identify the uses of pain in one's life lessons. According to Shakespeare, "Sweet are the uses of adversity."
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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This one-nine-one, Pain, uses the eleven syllables to identify the uses of pain in one's life lessons. According to Shakespeare, "Sweet are the uses of adversity."
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
An excellent 1-9-1 syllable count writing prompt entry that reminisces the ambivalent nature of pain.
The work highlights how pain could either predispose a strengthened or weakened individual.
The work constitutes a significant commentary on the fact that our destiny is a function of the CHOICES we make in life.
Excellent work ! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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An excellent 1-9-1 syllable count writing prompt entry that reminisces the ambivalent nature of pain.
The work highlights how pain could either predispose a strengthened or weakened individual.
The work constitutes a significant commentary on the fact that our destiny is a function of the CHOICES we make in life.
Excellent work ! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you SO much for your kind review. I appreciate your feedback.
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a message for living; it is our choice to lead life being stronger or weaker as pain makes us weaker or stronger; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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This speaks a message for living; it is our choice to lead life being stronger or weaker as pain makes us weaker or stronger; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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I always appreciate your thoughts and your review of anything I do. Thank you so much for your feedback.
Comment from apky
Yours is a great 1-9-1 poem.
I choose "stronger". Basically this is because of
a special time in my life when I was having my
son. I never experienced such pain in my whole
life. And there's never been a pain so full of
miraculous joy that made me forget the pain
altogether in no time at all.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Yours is a great 1-9-1 poem.
I choose "stronger". Basically this is because of
a special time in my life when I was having my
son. I never experienced such pain in my whole
life. And there's never been a pain so full of
miraculous joy that made me forget the pain
altogether in no time at all.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you SO much for your kind review. I did it four times!!! It is worth is though, we love our children.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Perfect advise given here in this little 1-9-1 poem. So short but so true. Excellent job. Good luck in the competition. I enjoyed your poem very much.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Perfect advise given here in this little 1-9-1 poem. So short but so true. Excellent job. Good luck in the competition. I enjoyed your poem very much.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a beautiful haiku! It conveys a very true message about pain. We can either become scared of the pain and grow weaker, or we can choose to overcome the pain and grow stronger. Great read!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is a beautiful haiku! It conveys a very true message about pain. We can either become scared of the pain and grow weaker, or we can choose to overcome the pain and grow stronger. Great read!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you SO much for your kind words. We all live with pain in some form and we do choose. Thank you again.
