A Torn Life
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4 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I ? being.........are you missing a word?
(to) keep me
Few missing words but very courageous and descriptive in its deliverance.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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I ? being.........are you missing a word?
(to) keep me
Few missing words but very courageous and descriptive in its deliverance.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks a bunch
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces the emotional perspective of a man wrecked by depression.
The work highlights his total distrust of all that had failed him and his resolve to hold unto that which had given him hope.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphor, alliteration, personification and imagery.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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The work reminisces the emotional perspective of a man wrecked by depression.
The work highlights his total distrust of all that had failed him and his resolve to hold unto that which had given him hope.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphor, alliteration, personification and imagery.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks very much, but it was posted outside of Voices of Brain Challlenges by mistake . Thanks for reviewing, it?s not my work. I?m not Gert
Trisha
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Thanks very much, but it was posted outside of Voices of Brain Challlenges by mistake . Thanks for reviewing, it?s not my work. I?m not Gert
Trisha
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Remain Blessed!
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Thought too Lloyd
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Keep on flourishing!
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Thanks ~ I intend to bloom where I?m planted,
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Keep on flourishing!
Comment from James H. Oldfield
A really good description, very well done indeed.
Just a minor correction:
Main stanza, line two, 'I being' would be either 'I am being' (present tense) or 'I've been' (past tense). I think it's the latter that you'd been aiming for.
Really good poem, great job.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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A really good description, very well done indeed.
Just a minor correction:
Main stanza, line two, 'I being' would be either 'I am being' (present tense) or 'I've been' (past tense). I think it's the latter that you'd been aiming for.
Really good poem, great job.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hi, James, Thanks, but this not MY poem! See theTitle? I am having trouble posting to my brain challenges page.
I appreciate your review
Hug, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about depression, what it is like and how it is felt and explained the experience; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This speaks about depression, what it is like and how it is felt and explained the experience; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks Al
