Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Eerie Gloom, is set up correctly and gives the sun a high five for bringing some promise to what is otherwise a dismal and depressing scene.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Susan Burger

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 sunrise/sunset contest. We have all experienced these dreary foggy days and the sun dispelling it's gloom away. Very nice composition. It flows well and the picture fits it perfectly. Good luck in the competition!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from angel123

Excellent

You used descriptive words describing the sunrise. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes!

Angel123

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from bmethner

Excellent

Beautiful! The artwork perfectly fits the poem's message. It follows the syllable requirements without feeling forced. It creates a vision of a winter's sunrise beautifully. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks sunrise in winter it is pale almost and that dispels the eerie gloom of dreary foggy days; well said, well done; good luck to you with the contest. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of a winter's sunrise
and solid use of alliteration to enhance the effect
Perfect picture match
Best wishes in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Great review -to the point thanks for reading zanya