Eerie gloom
5-7-5 sunrise6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Eerie Gloom, is set up correctly and gives the sun a high five for bringing some promise to what is otherwise a dismal and depressing scene.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This 5-7-5, Eerie Gloom, is set up correctly and gives the sun a high five for bringing some promise to what is otherwise a dismal and depressing scene.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Susan Burger
This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 sunrise/sunset contest. We have all experienced these dreary foggy days and the sun dispelling it's gloom away. Very nice composition. It flows well and the picture fits it perfectly. Good luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 sunrise/sunset contest. We have all experienced these dreary foggy days and the sun dispelling it's gloom away. Very nice composition. It flows well and the picture fits it perfectly. Good luck in the competition!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from angel123
You used descriptive words describing the sunrise. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes!
Angel123
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
You used descriptive words describing the sunrise. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes!
Angel123
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from bmethner
Beautiful! The artwork perfectly fits the poem's message. It follows the syllable requirements without feeling forced. It creates a vision of a winter's sunrise beautifully. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
Beautiful! The artwork perfectly fits the poem's message. It follows the syllable requirements without feeling forced. It creates a vision of a winter's sunrise beautifully. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks sunrise in winter it is pale almost and that dispels the eerie gloom of dreary foggy days; well said, well done; good luck to you with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
This speaks sunrise in winter it is pale almost and that dispels the eerie gloom of dreary foggy days; well said, well done; good luck to you with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of a winter's sunrise
and solid use of alliteration to enhance the effect
Perfect picture match
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of a winter's sunrise
and solid use of alliteration to enhance the effect
Perfect picture match
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Great review -to the point thanks for reading zanya