Men's Privilege
Man has the upper hand......27 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I have no more stars to give.
I like the photo you choose for your poem
It is a prefect match
Your words captured my attention from the start. Some men so win from the start.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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I have no more stars to give.
I like the photo you choose for your poem
It is a prefect match
Your words captured my attention from the start. Some men so win from the start.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
7
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thanks a lot Cookie for the warm and generous review. For the five stars too, thanks a bunch. Susan
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Yo're very welcome take care.
Cookie
Comment from Sherman541
I can hear them comparing the numbers and whose was best and etc. Men are so different from most women. I am guessing not all men are like this, hopefully the ones that have grown up especially, which is really good. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I can hear them comparing the numbers and whose was best and etc. Men are so different from most women. I am guessing not all men are like this, hopefully the ones that have grown up especially, which is really good. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for stopping by and for appreciating the merits of this humble piece. thanks from the bottom of my heart. God bless. Susan
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you are very welcome
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I mean do you think they just don't fall in love? I think women might fall faster and harder but I do think that men can lose just as much in a relationship as the woman. You did a great job
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I mean do you think they just don't fall in love? I think women might fall faster and harder but I do think that men can lose just as much in a relationship as the woman. You did a great job
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for seeing the merits of this poem and thanks also for the generous, warm review. All the best.
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello NASSUS1957: I really like your poem. Yes indeed. It is humorous. While we're being humorous; how about; the "FIRST," and "ONLY," upper hand was the hand that reached, "UP!" in that tree and plucked that "APPLE." It was the upper hand when it plopped the apple down into the lower hand. And that upper hand is still the upper hand "UP," to today. Don't take my word for it. Ask my wife. Ask Eve. God gave Adam the privilege to sample the vagina; and adding numbers. But He gave Adam the big, "NO! NO!, on sampling anything from Eve's
"UPPER HAND." But..."ALAS," he did. I'm sort of glad that he did. But I'm not telling you why. Because you're a woman. But I will tell you that I would've done what Adam did. Love: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hello NASSUS1957: I really like your poem. Yes indeed. It is humorous. While we're being humorous; how about; the "FIRST," and "ONLY," upper hand was the hand that reached, "UP!" in that tree and plucked that "APPLE." It was the upper hand when it plopped the apple down into the lower hand. And that upper hand is still the upper hand "UP," to today. Don't take my word for it. Ask my wife. Ask Eve. God gave Adam the privilege to sample the vagina; and adding numbers. But He gave Adam the big, "NO! NO!, on sampling anything from Eve's
"UPPER HAND." But..."ALAS," he did. I'm sort of glad that he did. But I'm not telling you why. Because you're a woman. But I will tell you that I would've done what Adam did. Love: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Oh thanks for the very sincere review, I like your wit and humor, LOL. Anyway, thanks a lot for appreciating my humble piece. God bless. Susan (aka nassus)
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, good one nassus. Not sure if I agree that men win in the end. The interrelationship between the sexes is in flux and old manipulative ways are not met with the success they were before. Thank goodness. I know nature is deceitful by definition, but I expect we have the intelligence to rise above it, yes?
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Ha, good one nassus. Not sure if I agree that men win in the end. The interrelationship between the sexes is in flux and old manipulative ways are not met with the success they were before. Thank goodness. I know nature is deceitful by definition, but I expect we have the intelligence to rise above it, yes?
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks a lot Gloria for the warm, heartfelt review and thanks again for the excellent stars. All the best. Susan
Comment from Henry King
A telling POV. I recognize it from my high school and college days. The people I ran with after those telltale days were let's say, more furtive. More than one drone buzzing a queen, that's one too many. There is a flower, somewhere, speaking with special scents, only for you or me.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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A telling POV. I recognize it from my high school and college days. The people I ran with after those telltale days were let's say, more furtive. More than one drone buzzing a queen, that's one too many. There is a flower, somewhere, speaking with special scents, only for you or me.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks a lot Henry King for stopping by and appreciating the merits of this poem. Thanks for the generous stars too. All the best.
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Your welcome
Comment from apky
Right. The old boy's fraternity.
Like, here's flesh, hunters, let's see who gets
to take the booty home.
Or shall we simply share? But she's smarter than the whole bunch.
She'll pick her favoured. So what better than having the whole bunch
to make the choice valid?
Great!
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Right. The old boy's fraternity.
Like, here's flesh, hunters, let's see who gets
to take the booty home.
Or shall we simply share? But she's smarter than the whole bunch.
She'll pick her favoured. So what better than having the whole bunch
to make the choice valid?
Great!
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks a lot apky for resonating with the message and for the intelligent review. Thanks too, for the five stars. All the best.
