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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Scene at a Pest Control Seminar"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
18 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
OMG, Bill, I'm afraid you've caught some dreadful disease from writing all these bits about roaches. I must say, even though you didn't exactly go there, I don't know if I'll ever eat another pancake without thinking of you.....
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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OMG, Bill, I'm afraid you've caught some dreadful disease from writing all these bits about roaches. I must say, even though you didn't exactly go there, I don't know if I'll ever eat another pancake without thinking of you.....
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Sorry. Roaches and these two guys seem to be everywhere.
Comment from nomi338
What a numb-nuts Ned is. It is going to take much more than pointy shoes to kill roaches. Believe me I know. Those pointy shoes are rather ineffective, plus they make your toes ache something fierce.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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What a numb-nuts Ned is. It is going to take much more than pointy shoes to kill roaches. Believe me I know. Those pointy shoes are rather ineffective, plus they make your toes ache something fierce.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Ned is one of those who couldn?t pour piss from a boot if the instructions were on the bottom.
Comment from Harry Smith
Bill I liked this short story. Do you have a fascination with cockroaches (smile). This was very well written as well.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Bill I liked this short story. Do you have a fascination with cockroaches (smile). This was very well written as well.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Harry
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You are welcome!
Comment from LIJ Red
A girl I knew said her stilettoes were for killing bugs in corners and knotholes. Maybe ske knows Ned. Excellent humor post.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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A girl I knew said her stilettoes were for killing bugs in corners and knotholes. Maybe ske knows Ned. Excellent humor post.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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That?s another Ned story.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Bill
I love the voices here, would love to hear their accents for real, just smiling thinking about them....great script and very funny
Mitchell
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill
I love the voices here, would love to hear their accents for real, just smiling thinking about them....great script and very funny
Mitchell
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Mitchell, fo4 the positive review. Bill
Comment from damommy
Roachinator and Bugaboo. Very funny.
I'm with Pons. I don't want to talk about roaches over pancakes, and I wouldn't want to be an exterminator.
Good job with Ned's dialect.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Roachinator and Bugaboo. Very funny.
I'm with Pons. I don't want to talk about roaches over pancakes, and I wouldn't want to be an exterminator.
Good job with Ned's dialect.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Giving voice to Ned gives me a headache.
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lol
Comment from pbomar1115
Pons was in for a surprise to learn that his buddy, Ned, who is a little nutty to plan to kill bugs without chemical, that he was being recruited to be a Roachintor. And also, will be expected to pay for pizza on the next get together.
Phillip
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Pons was in for a surprise to learn that his buddy, Ned, who is a little nutty to plan to kill bugs without chemical, that he was being recruited to be a Roachintor. And also, will be expected to pay for pizza on the next get together.
Phillip
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Ned is a piece of work.
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Yes, he is.
Comment from Spitfire
A fun spoof on those seminars that give a free dinner in hopeful return of getting new customers of recruits like a Ponzi scheme. Imagine watching slides of bugs while eating!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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A fun spoof on those seminars that give a free dinner in hopeful return of getting new customers of recruits like a Ponzi scheme. Imagine watching slides of bugs while eating!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Ned is a pest for Pons
Comment from judiverse
This is funny. I'm with the guy who didn't see the attractions of a career as a cockroach exterminator. Great details about Ned's method of getting rid of cockroaches. Who would have the patience to wait around for them to come out? Clever use of dialogue. judi
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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This is funny. I'm with the guy who didn't see the attractions of a career as a cockroach exterminator. Great details about Ned's method of getting rid of cockroaches. Who would have the patience to wait around for them to come out? Clever use of dialogue. judi
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Judi.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Just when I thought there was no more to say about roaches, you offer this great comedy sketch! It's fresh, original, and as always, very funny. I must admit, though I don't care for the critters, I do like this series! :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Just when I thought there was no more to say about roaches, you offer this great comedy sketch! It's fresh, original, and as always, very funny. I must admit, though I don't care for the critters, I do like this series! :)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks, BFC, for the kind review. Bill
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You're welcome, Bill.
