Out of Breath
3-5-3 'Air Poem9 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a great take on the "air" poem writing challenge! Yes, why wouldn't they tax that, too? And the picture is perfect as we need the oxygen in the air, not the CO2.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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What a great take on the "air" poem writing challenge! Yes, why wouldn't they tax that, too? And the picture is perfect as we need the oxygen in the air, not the CO2.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Glad you like it !! seems like we are fast approaching that point !!!zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Out of Breath, uses those eleven syllables to warn of the coming limitations on that thing we call oxygen. The rich, I guess, don't need it.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This 3-5-3, Out of Breath, uses those eleven syllables to warn of the coming limitations on that thing we call oxygen. The rich, I guess, don't need it.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reading and engaging with the notion lol zanya
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello zanya, OMG. There is some deep thinking going on here. This is a poem of truth. What else is left that can be taxed other than air and water. Of special note:
gasp for breath
(gasp for breath, indeed, poet friend)
A strong contest entry. Good luck in the voting booth. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hello zanya, OMG. There is some deep thinking going on here. This is a poem of truth. What else is left that can be taxed other than air and water. Of special note:
gasp for breath
(gasp for breath, indeed, poet friend)
A strong contest entry. Good luck in the voting booth. LateBloomer
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Grea t review ! what next for tax ?? zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem. The only thing we still can have for free is the air that we breathe every second to stay alive. It will surely be a sad day when we have to pay for the air we inhale.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem. The only thing we still can have for free is the air that we breathe every second to stay alive. It will surely be a sad day when we have to pay for the air we inhale.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Yes thanks for reading - nothing else left to tax lol zanya
Comment from Sherman541
HA HA air tax. That is one that they did not think of yet, but I assure you there is always a first and no one ever knows if or when. Great poem about Air! Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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HA HA air tax. That is one that they did not think of yet, but I assure you there is always a first and no one ever knows if or when. Great poem about Air! Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Great review - guess nothing else left to tax lol zanya
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you are welcome :)
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Again, Good Luck!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a wish that someday air tax may make us to breathe convulsively or laboriously; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks a wish that someday air tax may make us to breathe convulsively or laboriously; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
Comment from poetwatch
This is good. We can get away from many things...but taxes? That is one item that really sucks all the air out of the sky. Or maybe, Thins out the air from our wallet. A good entry for the 3-5-3 contest. :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This is good. We can get away from many things...but taxes? That is one item that really sucks all the air out of the sky. Or maybe, Thins out the air from our wallet. A good entry for the 3-5-3 contest. :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Ha Ha ..yes thanks of reading zanya
Comment from Debbie Pope
I am enjoying these "air" poems. Always fun to see what people can do with so few words and in so little time. Yours is perfect. Maybe we should rename the tax on tobacco "air tax." See, you got me to thinking.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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I am enjoying these "air" poems. Always fun to see what people can do with so few words and in so little time. Yours is perfect. Maybe we should rename the tax on tobacco "air tax." See, you got me to thinking.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile, they tax everything these days and your write is very appropriate for the contest and I wish you luck, now take in a deep breath, he he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This made me smile, they tax everything these days and your write is very appropriate for the contest and I wish you luck, now take in a deep breath, he he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Yes nothing else left to tax !!! thanks for reading zanya
