Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Music, uses those eleven syllables to roll back the years and recapture the tender tones of a loving mother. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you, you made my day!

Comment from HarryT

Excellent

Such a beautiful story in so few words. Love the drawing simple but touching. The words flowed just as the story fitting the 3-5-3 structure perfectly. Great job.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you, I really appreciate it

Comment from Fabiha_N

Excellent

This is a really great theme of a poem related to air. I like the flow to the words, and it is just as well-written as the other entries I read for this contest. Great job, I really enjoyed reading this!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you so much, I really appreciate you taking time to read my work.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI my friend....this is just beautiful....and so very true...my daughter can't sing a note...but when she sang to her baby daughter...that baby would smile and stop crying...who would guess...I love the words in your poem...and a prefect picture...good luck in the contest...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it.

reply by l.raven on 08-Feb-2018

you are so very welcome...love xxoo

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This seems to be the perfect response to this "Air poem" prompt. It is touchingly sweet and tender. The subject is something we can all relate to and the words are just right to express the sentiment. There is also plenty of meaning for those of us who like to see below the surface of the words. I loved it. Best of luck in the contest. I predict it is a winner.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for the wonderful review, it means a lot.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

What a sweet three-line poem. I am constantly amazed at the beauty of these little poems. They are so short, people are utilizing each word. As you do. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thank you for such a great review, I truly appreciate it.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yeah, mine too, Anonymous Poet.
In fact, my own mother had such a sweet voice it took my breath away to hear her sing.
She truly had a talent for it.
Nice 3-5-3 entry for the 'Air' contest.
Best of luck...


~Dean Kuch

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for taking time to review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 3-5-3 poem. A mother's voice singing a lullaby to her infant child is the sweetest voice to a child's ears. They will quickly go into a peaceful sleep.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

It's true. I sang to all my children when they were small. Thanks for taking time to read and review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how sweet she sings as your mother's breath held, so sweet, lovable was her voice; well said, well done; good luck to you for the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thanks again for reading and reviewing my work.I really appreciate it.

Comment from angel123

Exceptional

Your poem is exceptional and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with the good alliteration of s, letters, and sounds. I like your message, which is profound and your artwork choice. Please promote your poem. Best wishes!

Angel123

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your kind review and for the six stars! It made my day.