Black Blizzard, White
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Auction"A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
The Mitchell banker about choked but his hands were tied so he bit his tongue and walked back across the street to lick his wounds. Mr. Whitfield deposited the $37 and marked the deed paid in full. ' What a great story. I really love the ending. This a superb write very well done kindest regards Meia. xx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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The Mitchell banker about choked but his hands were tied so he bit his tongue and walked back across the street to lick his wounds. Mr. Whitfield deposited the $37 and marked the deed paid in full. ' What a great story. I really love the ending. This a superb write very well done kindest regards Meia. xx
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you for you great review. More to come though. I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Sherman541
I try not to read chapters until I can read the previous ones first, but as I came to this one and read just a small few lines I had to read it. Love the story and they kids locking the banker in the vault. And who does not love a happy ending :) Sherman541
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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I try not to read chapters until I can read the previous ones first, but as I came to this one and read just a small few lines I had to read it. Love the story and they kids locking the banker in the vault. And who does not love a happy ending :) Sherman541
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sherman, I am like you, I hate coming in in the middle but I SO appreciate your review and the five stars.
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you are very welcome I shall have to go check out the previous :)
