Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Beautifully written is this short story with lots of imagery and the picture selection went very good with the story. I really enjoyed the read and will be back. Have a great Easter.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for your lovely review.

Comment from Fabiha_N

Excellent

I think this is a really good entry for the dribble flah fiction contest. It's well written, and the words carry a deep and sad meaning. Your words paint a clear picture in my mind, and it's written in a way in which people can interpret it in many ways.
Great work :)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Just looking at the photo It made me mad.
To think countless of young lady went through that hell and never said a word.
I'm proud of those who are speaking now this has been going on top long
I venting because I can relate.
Cookie

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks so much, misscookie. You go girl!

reply by misscookie on 02-Apr-2018

My pleasure, take care
Cookie

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

This is really good and timely in its message. I should think this will do very well in the competition. I have trouble writing these short pieces. Good luck!

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks much. I enjoy the challenge of cutting unnecessary words out of a story -these short ones help me out.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

It's pretty bad if one has to get naked just so that they can get a part in a movie. Imagine if everyone had to do that at a job interview! It's terrible that a person in authority tries to take advantage of a person's need for employment and money.

This is an excellent entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest, JoAnn. Your write makes a strong statement on what happens all too frequently. Good luck in the contest with this entry that speaks volumes in a mere 50 words. ~~ Hugs, Connie

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. So true.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

That'll show him, right? Good job with your contest entry. The picture is perfect. I like that you got right to the point. But with only so few words, you have to do that. Good job & thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Um. I'm not sure what happened. I'm guessing the "he" was trying to take advantage of her as a guise to stardom in his "movies" but she got the upper hand and made a movie of what she did to him? Interesting and dramatic drabble.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Exactly. Thanks for reading.

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

Wow! Very well done and the choice of topic is a timely one. I enjoyed reading your work. Your photo to accompany your dribble flash fiction contest was impeccable.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

It appears that most everyone in Hollywood is a scumbag, but I'd be willing to bet the percentages are high everywhere. Without morals, and compassion for others, there isn't much hope for honorable people. Thanks for sharing. :-)

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thanks much, my friend.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Very clever, and topical, frogbook.
It's impossible not to empathize with those who have been robbed of
power and person. Your story adds to the conversation
and the outrage.

Well done.

Best of luck

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018

Thanks so much, Lee-truly appreciated.