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A Torn Life

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How mental challenges are seen and experienced

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Comment from Dan Diego
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You are so right about the stigmas that come with these disabilities. Personally, I watched my mom suffer from dementia and Alzheimer. I also have a friend who is walking across the US to support veterans with PTSD. I like the idea of creating a book for contributors to join.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Cig you would care to post a new view to the chapter feel free. That?s if it doesn?t hurt too much. I?ll start chapter #5 tomorrow, for Alzheimer?s.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello I believe you have a good multi authors-book talking about various problems with what is going on our brains, especially
how being Depressed how it made me feel

In My Time of Depression

Within waves of troubled waters
I being beaten and tossed about
by the jaunty winds that blow
from my lonely shore of doubt,
where the anchor of hope was cast;
that keeps pulling me in the strong gale;
I will patiently with strength hold fast to what?

Not any more I have my anchor of faith keep me afloat.
Gert


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Thanks Gert I am having teething problems with the book,. Hang in there, I?ll find a way
reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Feb-2018
    You are welcome Bucklist
    Okay I will be patient
    Gert
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Thank you!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Thank you!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Thank you!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Aspergers/offshoot of autism
Split personalities as opposed to bipolar
This is a great endeavor and i am interrested in finding out how you plan to start

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    I?m up and running and wanting personal stories, opinions, poems about any of the challenges. It?s a work in progress. Thanks for your review
    Hug
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The list looks very comprehensive Trisha, I hope I escape these terrible illnesses that ruin our lives, your write has highlighted mental illness and we all need to be aware, the brain is very delicate, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    The stigma is that anyone with these is mentally sick. But some are neurologically challenged, not thought wise it?s a mess!
    When I go to the doctors? if someone ignores me and asks my spouse ?Can she do ......? I lose my cool.
    Thank you so much for reviewing. I hope this ?takes off? !
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a grand dedication of the book to giving sufferers their 'voices', as well as others; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    You are welcome, Al thank you for a supportive review
    Hug, Trisha
Comment from Susan Burger
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The only thing I find to review is the prologue or opening statement. I hope I am not missing something here!
I like the picture you chose. It gives a little light -heartedness to a subject that can be heavy.
You may want to think about the wording of the second sentence. Possibly something like, This book is dedicated to giving a voice to those who suffer and others. Just a thought.
I am sure the stories in this book will be interesting, and helpful not only to those struggling with mental illness, but also family members, educators etc.
Good luck with this work. It is a relevant and important topic.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    This is a brand new project. Until people copy and paste their penning to the chapters, there is nothing else now! Thanks for reviewing kindly
reply by Susan Burger on 06-Feb-2018
    I am sure this project is quite an undertaking. I have spent the past 23 years working with special needs students. 15 years were working with students with emotional issues. I commend your wanting to give voice to those who suffer with mental illness. Best of luck in this project!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Anxiety- so bad it grips me like a vice. I had a doctors appointment this afternoon to discuss it. I found myself too ill to attend- to attend a doctors appointment regarding my anxiety! It is crushing and far to complex to explain my heart feels like it is being crushed in a vice. I panic at the thought of seeing anyone even those I really know well. I am either not eating or binge eating right now. I wake up several times in the night chocking. I have no quality of life. I am no tablets but they don't work anymore. This has gone on since childhood, thankyou for allowing me an outlet for this, I suffer from a few other conditions, bi-polar and schizoaffective disorder it is good to bring this to light. Kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Meia, this is just what I?d hoped for, bless you. But I?m new to this and I can?t post it for you. You need to go to multiple author book add this entry. Choose number 3 (Anxiety ) chapter and post your original of this, as if you are writing it as a new Post.
    There?s NO TIME PRESSURE and if you want to be anonymous you can be. I REALLY appreciate you sharing., and for the review. If you need further help let me know ?
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Meia, you should be able to copy and post yours to chapter 3.
    If you want the PTSD poem in the book, copy and post it to chapter 11
    Thanks!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The work addresses the problem of stigma attached to people suffering from brain disorder and the need to find lasting solutions to these problems.

The work highlights the scope of the problem areas with a view to getting more people to mobilise an appreciable voice share for the victims.

Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!



 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Thanks so much Lloyd. I really feel people have little voice, they become a diagnosis with unwelcome remarks etc. I KNOW the suffferers have feelings too. I have Parkinson Disease myself.
    I am still blessed,
    Hug, Trisha
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 05-Feb-2018
    Remain Blessed!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Thank you, same for you
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
    Thank you, same for you