Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about a mystic search of everybody's Eva, perchance in paradise; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

yes...it sure does.
tell me how does it feel to win bingo...?
I was contemplating a lil Morrison into the mystic
instead of the catalyst for my expression....though.
always Michael

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Michael, somewhere, sometime, and some place paradise...to only be there in a galaxy so surreal...
so close you can touch the heavens...I have always told you Michael...you are unique in your own style...and some of the words...lines you come up with are amazing...I love you poem...and this is the first time I have ever heard this song sung this way...it is beautiful...so much feeling...and your picture...perfect...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Hi Linda....-smile-
I was introduced to Eva...and seduced.
When I tried to find more of her, I'll never leave. I watched a foolish man break down and cry for not signing her star shine.
he begged her to forgive him, when she was diagnosed with cancer. he's says she did...smiling like it never happened....I believe him. I'm very sorry about your Dad. love Michael

reply by l.raven on 05-Feb-2018

thank you...he is a peace now...for that I am grateful...and thank you for being there for me...you don't know how much it helped...thank you for explaining your poem...doesn't take away that you can be so amazing in your poetry...

reply by l.raven on 05-Feb-2018

for some reason the site stop me before i finished... your story is sad...but ended as it should in Gods eyes...xxoo love