Black Blizzard, White
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Bank"A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty
2 total reviews
Comment from TearsOfBattle
I really like the vivid use of imagery and adjectives to knit this well thought-out story into something of an 1850 Texan bank robbery story. As someone who was born in the Rocky Mountains, (by Mount Everest), which is located in Antarctica (the hottest place on Earth), I can tell what a good story is and isn't and this beautiful piece of work is DEFINITLEY a good story. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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I really like the vivid use of imagery and adjectives to knit this well thought-out story into something of an 1850 Texan bank robbery story. As someone who was born in the Rocky Mountains, (by Mount Everest), which is located in Antarctica (the hottest place on Earth), I can tell what a good story is and isn't and this beautiful piece of work is DEFINITLEY a good story. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you SO much TOB for your really great review. This is my history (not true but founded on truth as told to me by my folks). I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a good writing that continues the story. You have well-developed characters and they communicate in believable dialogue. It's an interesting read. Thanks for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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This is a good writing that continues the story. You have well-developed characters and they communicate in believable dialogue. It's an interesting read. Thanks for sharing with us.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read my story and for the five stars. It's very much appreciated.
