Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Your lovely verse is a good match for the Sea Dragon photo.
Nicely done, well written, well rhymed.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It was noted that after the cleaned out the Thames in London, little sea horses started to appear! Your fascination with sea creatures is evident here and your poem is a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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reply by the author on 08-May-2018

That is sooooo awesome that seahorses appeared in the Thames. They are one of my favorite creatures. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how bizarre, funny, fantastic dragon Jolly Kraken meets and he surprises to see, find, note and enjoy its sweet-sour appearance and activities, it's wonderful to see and listens to its songs and dances; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-May-2018

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reply by the author on 01-May-2018

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I had to Wilepedia this little creature and yu did it justice very well. Nice rhyme and the fanciful life you brought to us is real. Very well done and you peeked my curiosity so had to learn more

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Did you see the picture and write your story around it? I never saw or heard of this delightful tiny sea creature. Jolly Kracken is a good name for a squid.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

I am obsessed with sea dragons and have observed them at the aquarium in Boston and the Tampa aquarium. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Dumbledor

Excellent

Nice, and colorful, nature rhyme. Pleasant and wholesome to read and enjoy. It seems to capture the feel and smell, and sound of the watery kingdom....love the use of the word ''kracken''. Reminds me of old films about Zeus and Greek legends, of sea monsters etc. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

Thanks for your encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Excellent rhyme in this. A comedic sea dragon is an unusual creature. Good for the sea dragon, he gets a laugh from the kraken for his efforts. Humor does enhance one's life, even in the underworld. Great description of the dragon in the first stanza. It's funny that the kraken's laugh causes the ocean waves to rise. judi

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 08-Feb-2018

You're very welcome. judi