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Black Blizzard, White

Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Cemetery"
A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty

2 total reviews 
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello!
This is a very poignant chapter. I appreciate your development of characters and your use of dialogue. It is very real and resonates with this reader. I am looking forward to reading more of Black Blizzard White!

Best Wishes,
diane

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your very nice review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a great loss of life in a family; characters are real and story is well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
    Thank you DR. Seems like we are old friends since you tend to follow this story. I appreciate your feedback.