Life
1-9-1 entry3 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
oh this is so true...just because you are getting older doesn't mean you should put the brakes on....take care of yourself...and you would be surprised how long you can live a healthy life...very well written...xxoo love
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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oh this is so true...just because you are getting older doesn't mean you should put the brakes on....take care of yourself...and you would be surprised how long you can live a healthy life...very well written...xxoo love
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your insights!
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you are so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the contest with the 1-9-1 syllables
I think you may need the actual word "life" for the rules
rather than "live" in the third line
Great art work to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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This is a fine entry for the contest with the 1-9-1 syllables
I think you may need the actual word "life" for the rules
rather than "live" in the third line
Great art work to match
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Michael says the word life can be in the title or in the body of the poem. I opted for the title. Thanks for the kind review.
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You are correct. I missed that.
Good luck!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 1-9-1 poem you have penned for the contest. You followed all the rules and used great descriptive words that made a lot of good sense~ Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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This is a very well written 1-9-1 poem you have penned for the contest. You followed all the rules and used great descriptive words that made a lot of good sense~ Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your encouraging words!
