Let Go
Reminder to Self5 total reviews
Comment from Cycler
Nice your poem and your comments. All in all, you've explained the situation very well. Writers block is quite a topic to discuss .. and write about
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Nice your poem and your comments. All in all, you've explained the situation very well. Writers block is quite a topic to discuss .. and write about
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you very much. Yes, it's quite a topic to discuss. We all have it. Was good to share thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Commando
'AWESOME'! Another commendable presentation, Cathy. Reminder of Self? Hmm! I well remember my Law Professor saying, "Bill, always remember who you are." I most certainly relate to 'Let Go'! A while back, I was visiting my cousin in the Smoky Mountains. I was on the east deck writing the final words of a chapter of my book. All at once, a baby black (cub) bear (eyes just open) came waddling out of the woods, and stopped short of the honey feeder close by. I walked over, picked it up and started to pet it. It began squealing, and out of the woods jumped mama bear. I'm here today, to say--"I LET GO!" Moral of my story, "Next time I get 'writer's block', I'm going to play with the baby (fawn) deer"--much safer! The artwork by, Karen Zima is mind-boggling! Your writing is 'Awe-inspiring, Cathy. Keep your quill wet with ink, creative mind creating--and keep a-writing! Best wishes and God bless.
xx Bill
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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'AWESOME'! Another commendable presentation, Cathy. Reminder of Self? Hmm! I well remember my Law Professor saying, "Bill, always remember who you are." I most certainly relate to 'Let Go'! A while back, I was visiting my cousin in the Smoky Mountains. I was on the east deck writing the final words of a chapter of my book. All at once, a baby black (cub) bear (eyes just open) came waddling out of the woods, and stopped short of the honey feeder close by. I walked over, picked it up and started to pet it. It began squealing, and out of the woods jumped mama bear. I'm here today, to say--"I LET GO!" Moral of my story, "Next time I get 'writer's block', I'm going to play with the baby (fawn) deer"--much safer! The artwork by, Karen Zima is mind-boggling! Your writing is 'Awe-inspiring, Cathy. Keep your quill wet with ink, creative mind creating--and keep a-writing! Best wishes and God bless.
xx Bill
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Best wishes to you, too, Bill. I'm honored. Thank you so much. You know I love your stories so I thank you also for sharing this one. Why am I not surprised you would do this? Made me smile. :) And, yes, God Bless!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Syllable count is good.
-Notes appreciated.
-Good use of one continuous thought.
-I like the point you make about
letting the thoughts and creativity
come from the heart.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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-Syllable count is good.
-Notes appreciated.
-Good use of one continuous thought.
-I like the point you make about
letting the thoughts and creativity
come from the heart.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Pam, for your review and comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and has the correct syllables at 5-7-5
The mind can do strange things, but so can the heart
Best to let go of all inhibitions, and just write.
Interesting Art work
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and has the correct syllables at 5-7-5
The mind can do strange things, but so can the heart
Best to let go of all inhibitions, and just write.
Interesting Art work
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Yes, agreed! Thank you. Appreciate it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in you few, well chosen words.
Good luck to you with this in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in you few, well chosen words.
Good luck to you with this in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Sharon. Much appreciated!
