Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 1-6-1 rhyming poem. We. An see the waves going wilder as the storm becomes stronger over the sea. A great photo to complement your poem about the rough sea.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2018

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a lovely entry for the 'Rhyme That 1-6-1' writing prompt.
You've told a good tale in just a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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Comment from Dumbledor

Excellent

A good entry to the short poem contest, framed by a photograph which captures the feel and intent of the verse. Nicely done within the confines of so few words.. Great imagery. Love the ''See'' and ''sea'' rhyming , complimenting each other.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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Comment from MercurySeven

Excellent

Nicely pithy and descriptive for such a short piece. The contest rules say all three lines should rhyme, but I'm just going to judge it on how I responded to it. It painted a picture - subject (see), object (sea), double description (waves billow, stormy) - in no time at all. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the one-six-one poetry contest. It was very clever to use the homonyms of 'see' and 'sea' to bracket the descriptions of the water.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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