Comment from Sugarray77

Good

Hi Mystery Poet. I like your selection and theme, but did want to point out that the prompt says all three lines need to rhyme. You have the right format, just need the rhyming. Good luck.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Hello, Thank you for telling me about the three lines rhyming. I went in and edited.

Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Good

This is a rhyme deficient 1-6-1poetry contest entry. The work is built on a very apt subject matter and structurally falls in tandem with specifications. But without an appropriate rhyming of all the three lines; the work is faulty and needs reworking.

Satisfactory work! But more grease to your elbows.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Dear Lloyd, Thank you for pointing out the error. I went in and edited.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I'd have no trouble with the not eating meat, but not eating at all would be a struggle. Do you think the word think should be 'eat'. He he he, just a thought, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review.

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

Very good, and the rating is based on the qualities of the poem alone.

However, were you aware this has been entered for a rhyming 1-6-1 contest? The three lines will be required to share a rhyme.

Take care.

-James

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Dear James, Thank you for your review and for pointing out the error. I went in and edited.