Sincerely, Unsigned
Forever unsaid16 total reviews
Comment from GLOBALEYES
Weak apology! "I should have pressed a little less". You never said anything, empty promises. Where are the truths? What lies? There should be more.
I was impressed by the rhyming, but left wanting for more substance. Betty Davis
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Weak apology! "I should have pressed a little less". You never said anything, empty promises. Where are the truths? What lies? There should be more.
I was impressed by the rhyming, but left wanting for more substance. Betty Davis
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your time and imput.
Comment from mandyjpg
I love, love, love this piece. I really like the detail and description you put into the poem that captures the uncertainty of sending a letter to a former loved one, who likely will not reply. I also really love the description you give of the speaker writing on the page. Love this, it is excellent.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I love, love, love this piece. I really like the detail and description you put into the poem that captures the uncertainty of sending a letter to a former loved one, who likely will not reply. I also really love the description you give of the speaker writing on the page. Love this, it is excellent.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It has good rhyme and rhythm and I particularly liked the last line. Very original content. Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It has good rhyme and rhythm and I particularly liked the last line. Very original content. Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Very clever, I really like the concept behind this.
The first stanza is by far my favourite, really well worded.
Great job, the rhymes felt effortless, the read was smooth. Nothing, really, to fault.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Very clever, I really like the concept behind this.
The first stanza is by far my favourite, really well worded.
Great job, the rhymes felt effortless, the read was smooth. Nothing, really, to fault.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from AudreyRose
Beautiful imagery here, i love it. The first stanza is my favorite, truth you seek and lies you need. The rhythm is even, good flow. You convey a feeling of caged anger, never to be released. Good job.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Beautiful imagery here, i love it. The first stanza is my favorite, truth you seek and lies you need. The rhythm is even, good flow. You convey a feeling of caged anger, never to be released. Good job.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write and these are the letters we would love to write but wouldn't dare to send! But here it is your letter in print, very cleverly pennned, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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This is a clever write and these are the letters we would love to write but wouldn't dare to send! But here it is your letter in print, very cleverly pennned, I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
