Sincerely, Unsigned
Forever unsaid16 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
Nice. The ending is best, of course, and makes the best point, in my opinion.
Are you new? I'm guessing you are since I haven't seen you before, but I'll fan you to keep up with your work. If you are new to the site--welcome. If not, I'm officially blind.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Nice. The ending is best, of course, and makes the best point, in my opinion.
Are you new? I'm guessing you are since I haven't seen you before, but I'll fan you to keep up with your work. If you are new to the site--welcome. If not, I'm officially blind.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thanks for your kind review. I am not new, just not that productive. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/letter. Sometimes itvis good to clear our mind of someone who need to hear our thoughts to write it down and sometimes tear it up after the writing is complete. It is a way how we can clean our souls
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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A very well-written poem/letter. Sometimes itvis good to clear our mind of someone who need to hear our thoughts to write it down and sometimes tear it up after the writing is complete. It is a way how we can clean our souls
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Ogden
Well, that's one way to avoid a possibly unsatisfactory exchange of correspondence. While writing some nice poetry first.
(Too bad that wouldn't work with the IRS.)
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Well, that's one way to avoid a possibly unsatisfactory exchange of correspondence. While writing some nice poetry first.
(Too bad that wouldn't work with the IRS.)
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Pantygynt
"it contains the truths you seek,
and tells the lies you need."
I am sure most us have at least wished to send something like this to someone like that at some time or another. I loved this. I was gripped by the first two lines. I bet those truths though sought were not what was needed and the lies though needed were probably not what was sought.
I only wish I had a six. Not everyone can handle mixed metre but this flowed like honey even if the content was arsenic - brilliant.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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"it contains the truths you seek,
and tells the lies you need."
I am sure most us have at least wished to send something like this to someone like that at some time or another. I loved this. I was gripped by the first two lines. I bet those truths though sought were not what was needed and the lies though needed were probably not what was sought.
I only wish I had a six. Not everyone can handle mixed metre but this flowed like honey even if the content was arsenic - brilliant.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Your kind review is very much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from nomi338
Even if the person we apologize refuses to accept it, we must apologize anyway, for the apology is much more for our sakes than theirs. I dare say that no person alive today has not angered or hurt someone else's feelings in some way. Whether we are ever forgiven by the ones we hurt or not, if we apologize sincerely. The father in heaven who sees all and knows all will see your genuine regret and forgive you and bless you richly.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Even if the person we apologize refuses to accept it, we must apologize anyway, for the apology is much more for our sakes than theirs. I dare say that no person alive today has not angered or hurt someone else's feelings in some way. Whether we are ever forgiven by the ones we hurt or not, if we apologize sincerely. The father in heaven who sees all and knows all will see your genuine regret and forgive you and bless you richly.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Sherman541
I very much like this poem. It truly is what many might do, write a letter and never mail or start a letter and never finish it. I like you style of writing it, leaving just never signing the letter. Very beautifully written. Sherman541
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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I very much like this poem. It truly is what many might do, write a letter and never mail or start a letter and never finish it. I like you style of writing it, leaving just never signing the letter. Very beautifully written. Sherman541
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
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you are welcome
Comment from Joy Graham
Hmmmm, a mystery. I just came from reading Phyllis Stewart's latest chapter of Crumbs, and she keeps doing the cliff hangers and leaving me in suspense. Now your poem has me wondering who, what, where, and when??? Actually, that is a sign of good writing when you can get me all worked up needing to know more.
I like your bouncy rhythmic lines and abcb rhyme scheme. This poem is well written. Inquiring minds want to know more lol!
Sincerely Joy xx
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Hmmmm, a mystery. I just came from reading Phyllis Stewart's latest chapter of Crumbs, and she keeps doing the cliff hangers and leaving me in suspense. Now your poem has me wondering who, what, where, and when??? Actually, that is a sign of good writing when you can get me all worked up needing to know more.
I like your bouncy rhythmic lines and abcb rhyme scheme. This poem is well written. Inquiring minds want to know more lol!
Sincerely Joy xx
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem that seems to be one of sadness. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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This is a very well written poem that seems to be one of sadness. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from royowen
It's the second poem in tandem I've read this morning similar in nature. Although the vexation is not specifically scribed, but only in general terms written, it still sings it's sad song, Written in a measured tone and meter. It's articulate and ambiguously reflective, in no specific meter, but abcb rhyming. Well done, less sings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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It's the second poem in tandem I've read this morning similar in nature. Although the vexation is not specifically scribed, but only in general terms written, it still sings it's sad song, Written in a measured tone and meter. It's articulate and ambiguously reflective, in no specific meter, but abcb rhyming. Well done, less sings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey there, I find this a most creative poem. The strongest stanzas to me are the opening and closing. Even with the writer giving the reader what they want, lies they will still decline the apology. Tis their prerogative for sure.
So very well done and thank you for sharing. One little typo it's (its) words will strangle hope.
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Hey there, I find this a most creative poem. The strongest stanzas to me are the opening and closing. Even with the writer giving the reader what they want, lies they will still decline the apology. Tis their prerogative for sure.
So very well done and thank you for sharing. One little typo it's (its) words will strangle hope.
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Oops! Thank you for your correction, your time, and kind review.
