Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That was very creative religious poem. It's good to let the imagination flow. Strong visual imagery. Well thought out and clearly written for anyone that believes/understands religion. Nice work.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Thanks ever so much Sunny for your beautiful review and your time is always talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

"Take me away Lord but don't take Your Eyes off of Me."
"Watch Me...
"Guide Me...

This is a great prayer that each of us would love. Your passion showed through

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time Barb.
Dr Ricky 1024

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Dr. Ricky;
Of course, you will be side by side with your son again. The best thing about Heaven is that we will be reunited with our loved ones as we worship the Lord together.

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks for your sweet and sensitive review Mustang dr. Ricky 1024 and have a blessed day

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes I think sometimes the sadness and the weariness of inhabiting a troubled planet, and living in a world that has so few ideals, but pretends it has, is too much for me. This is beautifully written Ricky, and reflects on how I was feeling this morning. I think you communicated a vexation and weariness of spirit which we all feel sometimes, my friend, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks forthis Roy and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024

reply by royowen on 01-Feb-2018

You too Rivky

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this one, Doctor Ricky! You capture the very heart of ones who are grieving and want to be with their loved ones who have passed on to Heaven before. It also gives us such a comforting picture!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

There is a spiritual feel and a strong steady beat to your words. I like how you are communicating with God and ask to be risen up. This is a wonderful faith based poem that inspires the reader.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time again.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent writing, Ricky. I don't see much of you on this site anymore. I love your writings and miss them when they are gone. Nicely done and great artwork.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

My rings have been restricted as of late mainly because I don't get along with the person that runs this site and I have checked to all his ways and meetings whether he's trying to chastise my writing abilities by not letting me defend them or he's trying to state that I cut and paste reviews which I do not do I talk into the phone and they do are alike it but they're not cut and paste or just talked into the cell phone and I told the person that but they still would not let me come back to writing and threatened that I wouldn't be able to do reviews or writing anymore unless I apologize thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh, dear Ricky, I wish I had words to offer that might be of some comfort, since I know that your heart hurts... You write so often of Jason, may he rest in the arms of the Almighty... But your faith is strong, and will see you through (although I hate platitudes - there's nothing that can take away one ounce of the pain of life sometimes...)
God bless you, friend!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Feel my pain Dawn... Watch it...
As it...
Soothes..This world...
Dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from charlene7190

Excellent

I see your pain in your work and pray it was better for you but I've told you before, I've seen this and there's no better way to deal with it than to put it to paper. Just an FYI (and you may already know) but in your verse "Take me away Lord but do not take your eyes off me", there is one tiny glitch, you misspelled Take. You might want to correct that. Other than that, I thought this was a beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks Charlene and thanks for pointing out that one or dr. Ricky 1024