The Kiss
Everyone remembers their first kiss.11 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I think we all remember (in our own ways) that very first kiss. I am impressed with how well you have captured that experience in this format. Very well-chosen rhymes for this 1-6-1. Rod
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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I think we all remember (in our own ways) that very first kiss. I am impressed with how well you have captured that experience in this format. Very well-chosen rhymes for this 1-6-1. Rod
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Rod. These short poems will hopefully help me with longer works. Baby steps.
