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"Wrong Turn"

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Disturbing Disturbance"
My thoughts on past and present experiences.

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Comment from frogbook
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Quite a powerful description of raw emotion and ever present memory. So sad when loved ones are taken too soon, and a child worst of all. This is a good way to let out your feelings.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this one ftogbook.
    Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from mermaids
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Those who have lost children can relate to your words. I like how at the end of your poem you ask God why? It is a very valid question and many can relate. Excellent poetic form.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thanks again Elaine.
    Ricky...
Comment from estory
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I think this was a terrific example of minimalist form. The repeating phrases, incomplete, stuck in a groove, created a sense of frustration, emotional frustration, at trying to come to terms with this terrible tragedy. We get glimpses of it, very surreal, very nightmarish. and then you can't seem to make sense of it. All the sentences ending in mid air were well executed. I thought this was a terrific experimental piece estory

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    And thanks for your wonderful review and time Estory.
    Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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"How much does a man have to take?"
"How much can a man be expelled?"
"And, how much does a man...
"Does a man have to take?"
"Forever to forsake?"

That is the question

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thanks Barb I know anybody would understand what's going on with this it would be you dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Dr. Ricky;
It is disheartening to read more details about your ordeal. I do hope writing about this is helping you. I'm glad you were able to donate organs - knowing a part of him is living on must help,

I will continue to pray for you,

~patty~

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    And thanks for your wonderful review and time again Mustang Sally.
    Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Dumbledor
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Short but dramatic writing, almost as if the writer is suffering so much it is hard for him to breadth. Brilliant capturing of atmosphere..sounds and feelings. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thanks Dumbledore.
    Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks the remembrance of moments when disturbing of disturbance occurred and a death took place; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    And thanks for your wonderful review and time again Alcrearor.
    Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Trudi Perkins
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Yes indeed WHY? We'll never understand why. Well written and I really enjoyed this poem. Your grieving through your poetry as much as I am.Take care of yourself God bless !

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Thanks...
    Trudi
    And, yes...
    I do as you....
    My Condolences...
    Ricky....