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Blessed for a second time

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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Skype was the platform
Keenly , from Kent, he proposed
" Yes, Yes, Yes" from me
Posy arrived on Valentine's Day
Ecstatic was I , with tear in my eye ...
You brought a tear to my eye too with this very special valentine! I loved the romance of it and found it utterly beautiful. Well done a gorgeous poem and a beautiful story of love at it's best love Meia x

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much for your warm comments, Meia..There is more to our story so perhaps I should write a second instalment. Between engagement on Valentine?s Day and our marriage I had to have serious surgery. Love has pulled me through.
Comment from jppoet
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tHIS IS A GLORIOUS POEM AND THE PHOTO LENDS AFFINITY TO YOUR PROSE. SENSITIVE AND SINCERE AS IT IS, AND IN FINE METRICAL FINESSE,
I SUGGEST THAT YOU TRY TO ADD SOME RHYMES. BLESSINGS, JOHN

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you again, John, for your warm comments. I realise that there was no rhyming but I just wrote as my muse encouraged me.
Comment from jenintorre
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What a beautiful, romantic poem. Skype is certainly a wonderfl invention. You describe this as a biography although it sounds to me like an autobiography.Either way it is a very good entry to the Valentine poem competition. Good luck.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your positive comments and good luck wishes. You are right, it is autobiographical.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem about a neat marriage proposal. You used very good descriptive words and lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest and congratulations on your wedding proposal! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you,Teri. We are now happily married and no need for any more Skyping .
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness! This is so beautiful and brought a tear to my eye! How wonderful! Whether this is true or not, I loved it, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
    Thank you, Dolly, for your warm review. This is true. We were married 5 months later, three years ago.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Jan-2018
    I am so pleased for you! I love these love stories, I wish you a long and happy life together, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
    Thank you Dolly xxx
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a lovely entry for the Valentine's Poetry writing prompt.
Well said and the emotion comes through nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
    Sharon, your kind words are much appreciated. Thank you