The Life of Mrs. Armstrong
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Comment from lyenochka
Wow! That's a whole day's work! And what a blessing!
During these COVID days, we are all more aware of keeping things clean. But I really appreciated that you cleaned the equipment surfaces for your friend. Making the coffee, arranging the furniture, and all these looking into the details shows such love!
learn about her mothers' care (mother's)
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Well either interesting or smart. (didn't know what this meant. The kids were not interested in the medical field? I'm sure they were plenty smart. )
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Wow! That's a whole day's work! And what a blessing!
During these COVID days, we are all more aware of keeping things clean. But I really appreciated that you cleaned the equipment surfaces for your friend. Making the coffee, arranging the furniture, and all these looking into the details shows such love!
learn about her mothers' care (mother's)
Question:
Well either interesting or smart. (didn't know what this meant. The kids were not interested in the medical field? I'm sure they were plenty smart. )
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Helene. I was always a bit of a clean freak, even before Covid, lol. I made those corrections just before I answered this.
Comment from Pantygynt
This follows the previous chapter seamlessly, but I am still unclear as to the position of these chapters within the whole book. Is she telling this story to the class or is it unrelated to the class?
A little lack of clarity of a different sort caught my eye here:
"Her husband had left shortly after the last child." This is unclear. Do you mean, "after the last child had left", or, "after the last child was born"?
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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This follows the previous chapter seamlessly, but I am still unclear as to the position of these chapters within the whole book. Is she telling this story to the class or is it unrelated to the class?
A little lack of clarity of a different sort caught my eye here:
"Her husband had left shortly after the last child." This is unclear. Do you mean, "after the last child had left", or, "after the last child was born"?
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Ahaaa, good point(s), well noted, I was going for the idea that it is not related to the class but gives a little more insight to who she was and who Roni is and how they got together. I will go back in and try to think of something to clarify it and also about the husband leaving. Whew you are making me work on this one lol.
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I am working you hgard because it is worth getting right.
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A true task master. I got distracted with a bit of an emergency but I will address the concerns now. Again thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the hospital stay is over and recovery prevails, feeling about home and family and plan for the next course of living, well said, well done in a free flow of thoughts. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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This speaks the hospital stay is over and recovery prevails, feeling about home and family and plan for the next course of living, well said, well done in a free flow of thoughts. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for your comments, very much appreciated.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an interesting chapter. I read your profile. So you are Indian American and a Wiccan. That's an interesting combination. My wife's mother was American Indian. My wife says that her mother knew things that no one else did.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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This is an interesting chapter. I read your profile. So you are Indian American and a Wiccan. That's an interesting combination. My wife's mother was American Indian. My wife says that her mother knew things that no one else did.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. That is so interesting. I actually became Wiccan because when I came of age to decide for myself rather than having a 'forced' religion, it was the closest out there being recognized by the government as a religion. It is interesting how are lives are affected by our ancestors. Again thanks.
