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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Spread the Word"
A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty

2 total reviews 
Comment from Wetbelly01
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I like it!... That's the way it was back then!... neighbors helping neighbors...
That sort of thing doesn't seem to happen like that anymore...
What a shame... I didn't notice any 'glitches'...
My compliments!... Well Done!!... Looking forward to what's next!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much WB!!! I appreciate your feedback.
reply by Wetbelly01 on 30-Jan-2018
    You're most welcome!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a nice catch, how word spread quickly through the community that a baby is lost; and ends with a plan; well said, well done. Continue writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much. I appreciate that you are following my story. More to come.