Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I'm sure there are many people who have passed over too early though someone else's negligence who would love to make the voices heard. If that were possible, many who die tragically would the be able to rest peacefully. You wrote a moving piece about your son's death, in his voice. Well done, Ricky. Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review Sandra.
Ricky...

Comment from Violet WolfChild

Exceptional

So sorry for your loss. Your poem is beautiful and tragic. The emotions are pure and raw. It's heartbreaking, and heartfelt. A love that exists beyond the grave. exceptional piece of poetry.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Ricky....

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Car accidents scare me. I don't want to die in one and I hope I'm never in a severe one. It's hard when you lose someone but at least he lives on in others and even though he wasn't able to have a second chance these others were.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thanks experiencing I've walked away from quite a few I told the $40,000 Lincoln with minor injuries been hit three times riding a bicycle by cars the most recent I had to have any kin fraud put in my right leg thanks for your review and Time Dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Hi Ricky
What an excellent poem about your son , Jason. I enjoyed reading it and thought it was written in a very original way? Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thanks Jen and I just got up about 15 minutes ago decided coming to living room Check reviews heard one of my cats crying to come in now I'm watching a movie I never seen on Comcast called Exorcist shark so I see that you're a bit of a night owl also dr. Ricky 1024 thanks for the review

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

"So, he now paints a picture on the pallette or mural...
(Of what's left)
"What he can find... "What's left of Me...
"Up there...
...
"And, here I am... beautiful and emotional work as always Ricky. Well done this is amazing kindest regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

As Beautifully written as a rainbow?
Snow?
And you...
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Rasmine

Exceptional

Every time I read a poem about your son like this, my heart breaks for you. I can't imagine what you are feeling. I hope writing these poems helps you.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Yes my email on my work when it comes to Jason also my wife is to alert people about organ tissue donation suicide to get them help if it's needed I also love to write about addiction levels in the different types of those I've actually spoken out and against those in the place up in Toms River New Jersey called journey to Wellness and save one suicidal Vick victim dr. Ricky 1024 and have a blessed day

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Jason was talented and did much in his eighteen years. I like how the poem is written in Jason's voice which gives the poem life. This is creative and you have given me some ideas for poems.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks Elaine.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Jason, if I could turn back the hands of time I would...I guess God takes us in His own time...I don't know how He sets the clocks...only that He does...but how wonderful to know you saved four peoples lives when you passed...what an amazing legacy to leave behind...you saved four people Jason...that without you...the doctors could not have saved... your not gone sweet boy...you are here in the sense that God...Jesus are...you are a beautiful spirit...I am so sorry for the accident that took your life...but I will tell you...and I know you already knew...you are so very missed beautiful boy...your father keeps you alive in his heart and in his words...you will never be lost...I am so glad to meet you...it is an honor to know you...be at peace...love Linda xxoo

Hi Ricky, your story is very well told my friend...and Jason's resting place is beautiful...and his home even better...amazing...very well written...picture...priceless...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks Linda and I'm sure Jason thanks you too from where he's at talk to Ricky 10:24 and have a beautiful rest of your week

reply by l.raven on 29-Jan-2018

you are so welcome Ricky...and you have a beautiful rest of the week as well...xxoo love

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Ricky. I love the seriously engaging attitude in this one. It is as if you are truly tuned into what your boy would have said or did say and put it into a poetic verse that is beautiful. Bravo. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks now I for your wonderfuand kind review.
Ricky

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Exceptional

I HAVE BEEN MISSING WRITTING AND READING I HAVE A LOT OF CATCHING UP TO DO I HAVE LOST MY WORDS ALONG THE WAY BUT I THINK I'M COMING BACK WITH A BANG LOVE YOUR FRIEND

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Glad to see you back love...
Dr Ricky 1024